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RitadeCassia β€” Cute Steampunk Girl by-nc-nd

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A-Panda-Girl [2014-09-24 22:37:36 +0000 UTC]

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I love the simplistic look. Please note: the right hand is a little odd but I only noticed because of a comment; the feathers aren't right- they look like they are floating rather than attached to something; add more detail to the goggles; I would add the bridge to the nose; add a band or something to the socks, they look a little out of place, and keep proportions even on the thighs. BUT, I love her position and her facial expression; I love her eyes because they make her look very innocent; I also like the little touches, such as the extra part on belt and the heart on her chest; I absolutely love the overall look, what I mentioned are just little snowflakes in a blizzard of art . Continue the good work. e.deviantart.net/emoticons/s/s… " width="15" height="15" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="391" title=" (Smile)"/>

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RitadeCassia In reply to A-Panda-Girl [2014-09-25 00:49:15 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the critique, I will strive to become more attentive to details, I'll try to be more cautious in the next drawings. Thank you so much. Β 

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A-Panda-Girl In reply to RitadeCassia [2014-09-29 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. I'm glad I did a good job because I haven't done aΒ critique before. *__*

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RitadeCassia In reply to A-Panda-Girl [2014-10-03 01:07:53 +0000 UTC]

you were gentle Β 

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MaximumDoodie [2014-09-11 16:16:52 +0000 UTC]

yes super cute!
SHE DOESN'T HAVE A HAND O_O;;

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renolamoi [2014-09-11 16:08:28 +0000 UTC]

She looks great

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