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Rivan145th — The Circus of Namtas 4-5
Published: 2011-10-22 22:00:22 +0000 UTC; Views: 8395; Favourites: 140; Downloads: 78
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Soundtrack! [link]Perious: [link]
Next: [link]
And here are pages 4 and 5! (You can find pages 1-2-3 here: [link] )
I know it’s been ages since I posted the previous ones, but I think I’ll be able to submit a new page every week from now on
In fact you’ll find pages 6-7 tomorrow or this Monday, not later!
Thanks to and Marta Lauro for the translation
(thank you really!!! X))I’m quite embarrassed to show this comic to you, so, I really hope you can appreciate it
Italiano: [link]
The Circus of Namtas (c) by me
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Comments: 21
I've just stumbled upon your comic and I am still unclear of the topic, per se. Your art, though, is astounishing and I enjoy the dark alice in wonderland/cirque du freak vibe you've got going.
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interesting music choice! 
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Whoa, this is amazing <3
I'm not sure if I'm going to be able to like critique this, because...I don't know enough about the storyline yet XD
Your drawing skills are great! I'm nowhere NEAR as good an artist as you, but I think maybe in the panel when he's lying down, the black lines on the towel could be a little less prominent...unless it's supposed to be like that :@
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*Is sitting on the edge of his seat.* This is fantastic! I love the art. <3
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looks so interesting, I want to know who's coming
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This is fantastic, and that really is all I have to say on the matter.
Thank you.
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I think you need a beta reader to help with the English.
Awesome artwork!
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I love the fact that you put a soundtrack to go along with the strip! It makes it just that much more immersive.
Not to mention the amazing art style you have, and the way you position things. It's just all so spot on, a pleasure to read.
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I'm really glad you like it :'), but unfortunatly I'm not so satisfied about the result : /
Well, I hope you can find the next pages more enjoiable than the previous
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Well seeing as how I just came here from writing a message on your next strip saying how much I loved it, I definitely enjoyed it more! (Not to say this one is bad of course) Alot of comic strips have some boring-ish pages just to get the point across. I'd say you did VERY well for what you were doing. Always a pleasure.
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Incredible, as always C:
I love your style, realistic but with a cartoonish touch, and the colours you use are great
I'm really curious about this comic of yours, I had been loooking forward to it since you submitted the first three pages. I do hope you show more of it soon! It's really good, so don't be ashamed
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Thank you, really! I'm so glad you like it
I hope you can find the next pages more enjoyable than the previous
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