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Published: 2008-02-15 14:05:05 +0000 UTC; Views: 6333; Favourites: 46; Downloads: 34
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Okay page 2, I am... I dunno, not as happy with this one. I really need to work on my comic pages XD;; Please have patience with me, it is my first time doing a black and white doujin.page 1 - [link]
page 3 - [link]
Within the Circuit (c) River-bird
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Comments: 32
zuko a suit i did not see that coming lol great work though
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Interesting "Elseworlds" type story. Nicely started. I hope you finish the whole thing.
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Sokka's outfit caused me much drooling. I have no idea why, but this kind of clothing is one of my weak spots. XD
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Yeah same, that's why he is in it XD
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sokka and katara look so awesome!
poor zuko probably doesn't deserve to be bullied by katara like that ... {or does he? XD}
he's got no scar! D: *gasp*
i wonder what this meaaaansss.. <<; ;>>
great start. 
looking forward to more
abayo ;D
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Yeah he has no scar right now.... As for the reasons for being bullied... Well let's just say that Katara and Zuko have switched some characteristics, Katara has a lot more anger in her, and not just at Zuko in particular. But she has reasons behind her actions. One of the main themes of the story is healing in different levels, and finding out who you are. It will be darker, as I said before, but yeahhhh no more spoiling. XD
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Aww, I love it.
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Thanks! Glad you are loving it. : D (Did I ever tell you that I love your icon? It makes me smile)
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You're welcome! ^_^ (Thanks! RedJarRed made it for me. ^_^)
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Mehhhheehehe I couldn't resist mate
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no problem it gives you the idea that she is mad
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WOW I love your style...the characters look SOO good!
Sorry, but the fangirl in me feels the urge to say this: Sokka looks awesome. Something about his design...he's my favorite in terms of appearance. Katara looks really cool too.
I'm excited! Can't wait to see how Aang is introduced.
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Mehehehehe I really wanted to make Sokka look good, was reall picky with his outfit. I'm glad that you think he looks really hot as well! XD
I am looking forward to getting Aang in the picture, but it is going to be another four or five pages before he comes in. He has an exciting entrance though (a secret....A certain lady will be coming in before him) : D
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I love zukos design. ^.^ katara's outfit STILL is rocking my socks. xD
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Yay! Yeah, I love finding angles that allow me to draw her outfit some more.
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Ahahaha XD Yeah, she did, Sokka censor stopped her though.
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the amazing sokka censor bleeps out curses and rude gestures, but knowing it, it probably utters a few when overused or abused
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My sister's freaking out about Zuko not having a scar. I dunno, I guess he looks more like Jet...
I like how you have Zuko's name bolded to stand out.
I really like Katara's hair style.
Are they the same age as they are in the show?
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Hahaha, well I did it for a reason. They will all have some issues that they need to get over in this story. I wanted Zuko to have the same problem, but I took the scar out too see how things would be different.
There are quite a few changes in store! Hohohohohohohohohohohohoho
No, everyone is a few years older, I should write that out in the next part. I will have the next one up Sunday or Monday. : D
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o*___*o° Oh, I ADORE Katara and her outfit! Lemme worship you!
But Sokka looks absolutely cool as well. I love how you draw their eyes and expressions!
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: D I love it too! Thanks, I'm glad you think they look good! XD
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I looooooooove Sokka.
Actually, all of the modern versions.
But especially Sokka.
Keep going!
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Yeah, Sokka and Toph are my favorite characters in this story XD I paid a lot of attention to them.
They have a lot of screen time, although both are a bit more serious in this story.
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