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Published: 2019-01-18 06:00:04 +0000 UTC; Views: 23965; Favourites: 602; Downloads: 25
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Pg 79: SR Comic: Pg 79

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Pg 1: SR Comic: Pg1 *Redone*

Original version (for those who still want to read/compare the old pages, I won't delete them) : Scarlet River: Pg 1

Written Version:  Scarlet River P1        The moon was a sliver in the sky, only dimly shining on a winter night. Darkness clung to the snow-covered forest below; deep shadows lying beneath the bare, black branches. Through thick swathes of snow a young cat struggled forward. Her head barely cleared the surface of the cold, white substance, and her brown, silver-striped coat was plastered to her sides, revealing a jutting ribcage. She had been running for many suns and moons now, relying on instinct and a darker resource...one that the kit tried hard to ignore.      
        She took another faltering step, her paws numb.  I have to get help. She thought faintly. Her next paw-step slipped, and she fell into the icy drifts, weakly shivering. Through half-closed eyes, she stared up through the bare arms of the trees. The sky was dark and clouded, the claw-like moon half covered. She struggled to stand, but there was no strength left in her thin, bony le

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DragonKitty227 [2021-11-04 22:29:08 +0000 UTC]

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HazardousFlareon [2021-04-27 15:25:17 +0000 UTC]

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luvwarriors [2020-09-04 08:01:52 +0000 UTC]

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Topaz-cat1234 [2019-06-24 23:28:16 +0000 UTC]

oooh yes yes yesss

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anomy-meow [2019-02-14 20:22:33 +0000 UTC]

echo can make anyone happy again

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EssyrFT [2019-01-23 15:02:46 +0000 UTC]

That's it Echo! >:3

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Fluffybunnyicecream [2019-01-23 07:33:41 +0000 UTC]

WHO GAVE U FOD

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Endlesshunter [2019-01-21 08:14:59 +0000 UTC]

welp she has a point. Just because she can't help you with saving your family doesn't mean they haven't still helped you so far. Though I understand why River is so angry. Ugh I hate being able to see things from both sides xD

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Anonymous766 [2019-01-19 23:54:33 +0000 UTC]

i find it funny how everyone's saying that the cat whos freaking the heck out and feeling betrayed and desperate is the jerk. DUH SHES SCARED

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WolfyTacoCat In reply to Anonymous766 [2019-01-20 20:47:51 +0000 UTC]

VERY SCARED
AND SAD

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KeychainDraws [2019-01-19 22:27:16 +0000 UTC]

Hey River, maybe if you weren't whining like a toddler they'd actually wanna help.

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Fluffybunnyicecream In reply to KeychainDraws [2019-01-29 05:18:10 +0000 UTC]

Haha lol

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XNeonlightz99X [2019-01-19 19:13:08 +0000 UTC]

Preach Echo

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AutumnsDusk [2019-01-19 07:46:10 +0000 UTC]

Honestly theyre both in the wrong
River moreso because she's heavily taking this for granted and being disrespectful 
But Echo is being really pushy too, they dont know each other and being tough isnt always the best choice

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Tigerclaw014 [2019-01-19 03:36:10 +0000 UTC]

Basically yeah they fed you river and ur not going to make friends that way -.- and they are trying to help you

Love Echo here giving that tough love! 

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luvwarriors In reply to Tigerclaw014 [2020-09-04 08:00:07 +0000 UTC]

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crazycoolcats [2019-01-18 23:27:10 +0000 UTC]

I totally understand Echo and River needs to realize her mistakes but dang, Echo also needs to let her chill a bit eejfnjfskn

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yewforia [2019-01-18 22:51:58 +0000 UTC]

echo seriously just needs to leave river alone. she's the one who approached her.

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Everlyisa In reply to yewforia [2019-01-19 00:49:21 +0000 UTC]

She was trying to help but like it’s not her fault for defending what she thinks is right, River was insulting her leader.

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luvwarriors In reply to Everlyisa [2020-09-04 08:00:47 +0000 UTC]

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SandwichGab [2019-01-18 22:39:07 +0000 UTC]

Sometimes River makes me wish she never escaped the Legion   

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mimiquence [2019-01-18 20:46:57 +0000 UTC]

River’s being a jerk
just sayin

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WumpusthePotatoMumph [2019-01-18 20:24:57 +0000 UTC]

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WumpusthePotatoMumph In reply to WumpusthePotatoMumph [2019-01-18 20:25:40 +0000 UTC]

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AutumnsDusk In reply to WumpusthePotatoMumph [2019-01-19 07:44:02 +0000 UTC]

You gave birth to them. they didnt ask to be here. It's your duty to give them basic needs, they dont have to respect you for that! You brought them into the world so its your responsibility to care for them!! 

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Coastalwaves In reply to WumpusthePotatoMumph [2019-01-18 21:02:43 +0000 UTC]

Because obviously forcing them into a world where all they're gonna find is stress and not disowning them is you being kind.

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cosandk In reply to Coastalwaves [2019-01-18 23:11:49 +0000 UTC]

wheres a like button dA?? This comment needs one!

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yewforia In reply to Coastalwaves [2019-01-18 22:51:03 +0000 UTC]

....

jeez, way to look at the glass half empty.

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Coastalwaves In reply to yewforia [2019-01-20 13:26:42 +0000 UTC]

My school once taught me that it’s always full. Half wig air and half with water.
Though looking back on it I don’t think I can make much sense of that.

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Topaz-Glimmer [2019-01-18 20:22:38 +0000 UTC]

The stand off of the century

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CitraDrawsLemons [2019-01-18 18:59:31 +0000 UTC]

Exactly River, exactly.

Now we may finally return to our senses.

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Puppens101 [2019-01-18 17:59:13 +0000 UTC]

Mood

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yewforia [2019-01-18 17:54:11 +0000 UTC]

well certainly not you, echokit

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DiamondTubeDraws [2019-01-18 16:15:28 +0000 UTC]

Angry Echokit. This Violates the laws of nature.

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sageteaz [2019-01-18 15:34:51 +0000 UTC]

I could cut the tension in that last frame with a knife woah

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FacelessEnemy852 [2019-01-18 15:22:34 +0000 UTC]

oof

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CrypticC0rpse [2019-01-18 15:03:30 +0000 UTC]

River may just be hangry

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MeadowMedia-Art In reply to CrypticC0rpse [2019-01-18 16:20:19 +0000 UTC]

She needs a snickers

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Decemberly99 In reply to CrypticC0rpse [2019-01-18 15:07:13 +0000 UTC]

I love them both

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GreenNoir [2019-01-18 12:35:56 +0000 UTC]

good point

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PINKYDEITY [2019-01-18 12:23:12 +0000 UTC]

go loose Echo

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Skyshade5 [2019-01-18 11:54:39 +0000 UTC]

Aww I love Echokit.

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MyrkTheCat [2019-01-18 10:39:54 +0000 UTC]

H A H RIVER, SO T H E R E

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SierraRebecca [2019-01-18 06:28:49 +0000 UTC]

River, being a rogue cat, has very little understanding of the delicate balance of power and politics among the four Clans. If any significant group of warriors leaves a single Clan's territory for an extended period of time, other Clans may see that as an opportunity to expand their hunting grounds. ShadowClan is notorious for such opportunistic tactics. Lightstar cannot spare her warriors for the sake of a rogue cat to attack a faraway group of violent strays, especially given the risk that would present in turning said group of cats into an immediate threat.

What's happened to River is indeed horrible, but Lightstar's duty is to ensure the protection of her Clan and its territory. Assisting in River's proposed rescue mission would only put ThunderClan at risk.

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Abberistired [2019-01-18 06:28:23 +0000 UTC]

....ef she has a point--

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NexTyphoon [2019-01-18 06:05:45 +0000 UTC]

I'm solidly with River here. From her point of view, these cats are willing letting her family be tortured and/or killed, but they gave her food so that makes it okay. I'd be upset too...

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Everlyisa In reply to NexTyphoon [2019-01-18 07:15:32 +0000 UTC]

Well I mean they can’t just start risking their life for a rogue that just came along, they did their best atleast to help her survive. But fighting an army would’ve just ended up in more deaths

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SierraRebecca In reply to NexTyphoon [2019-01-18 06:23:02 +0000 UTC]

Lightstar can't just send a bunch of warriors several days' journey away in order to mount an attack against a significantly larger group that has no knowledge of their existence. Especially not with RiverClan and ShadowClan maintaining full forces of warriors in their own territories. She'd be weakening ThunderClan's security for a perfect stranger to enter a skirmish that would undoubtedly lead to a larger conflict later on. Lightstar's just being pragmatic, which is a critical quality for clan leaders.

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synicalsnow In reply to NexTyphoon [2019-01-18 06:21:58 +0000 UTC]

I'd be upset too but as a Clan they have no idea what they'd be getting themselves into, nor has there been any concern in the past within the Clan. Echo has a point on they did help her and not let her starve in cruelty.

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InfiGhost [2019-01-18 06:03:04 +0000 UTC]

Echo has a point. River is just confused by anger and everything going on. Poor bby ♡♡

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