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RizyuKaizen — Rizyu City Clothing v2.0
Published: 2009-09-21 14:57:52 +0000 UTC; Views: 1382; Favourites: 35; Downloads: 0
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Media: Copic Multiliners, Photoshop CS4Time: 3-4h approx
Not much changed since last reference I posted of this. But Rizyu is a sword user so now he carries his twin blades on his belt. I will be doing another one of him in more city clothing but he will be more heavily armed to bounty hunt.
Rizyu and Raligards © Heather Kantner
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He's a little out of proportion, I wont post this as a crit because I dont see myself as...erm...I'm not good enough to crit other peoples art so~
But yes, unless its a species thing, he's got a few wonky problems such as: His head is very wide and stout, his shoulders are far too broad, his chest is rather flat, his hand is at a funny angle for the position of his arm, his hips appear to be the hips of a woman and his legs are short in comparison to his body :3
I'm no master myself but at the moment I'm looking as muscles and body shapes, you should do the same and re-visit basic human anatomy :3
As for everything else, I've always loved his design! Those runes are also very well done, some of the most detailed I've seen :3
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The legs I will say are like that. Cause of the biped bends. If you make them stretch out like a Human leg they would be semi close to proportion to the body. And Riz is very flat chested XD. He is skinny and lanky then most other males of his race. I know he is a bit to broad up top compared to his legs in this. Kinda was a flaw when I drew him up and I got lazy to redraw it. I dont know about the head being to big though. Could be just the way your looking at his hair. But thanks for the crit =3.
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Does your message centre crush long messages and not give you a slider? Because its doing it to me and I was like 'Wheres the rest? Stupid DA whut?' xD
Ah I see, they dont bend as much as other digitigrade characters I've seen though, you might just need to make his shins and thigh a tad longer :3 Lol awh poor Riz! xD I know that feeling, I was just saying to my sister before, real life needs un-do buttons after making a mistake and stabbing the table where the un-do buttons would be on my keyboard xD
His heads the right size taking into account his hair, but have you ever seen DragonballZ? Their characters heads are wide and stout with the face squished into the bottom third of the head (you dont do the face smushing though!) I think it may be the length of his eyes and the spacing between that make his head look to wide :3
and no problem! It was just a few things I noticed! :3
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lol somehow no DA is not doing that to me. Most of the time I do make his legs long enough. Hrm dont know what happened here. /shrug. I would love a RL undo button. So many thing I would have gone back and undone. Yes I have seen DBZ. Sad to say I watched a bit of it when I was younger *think stoped watching it in middle school*. Their hair is freaken outrageous. @@
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I think DA hates me then xD
I guess theres always tipex, but it makes such a mess, then again PS fixes everything!
Me too and I almost vomited my guts out watching one of their movies, the voice actors, oh god the voice actors xD It should be illegal to be that bad xD
It is pretty freaky, Vegeta's always reminded me of a christmas tree xD
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XD HAHAHA! Omg I can jus see Vegeta sitting there with blinking lights in his hair XD.
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8D Yay it's so awesome to see your characters again! I like his design! 
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>^^< ty hun. With this week off I hope to get more characters done for Bloodlines. And his tat is the mark on the underside of his feral forms wings.
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Love your outfits and character creation in general!
Out of curiosity, how do you do the cool blue glowy thingies? They're so... symmetrical and awesome.
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You can find the brushes here: [link] :3
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There are brushes ohgod thank you Majime!!
<3
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The background runes are now presets for me. I made them in college I just transferred them over recently to this comp.
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They look like FMA transmutation circles....awesome.
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Rizyu = 
I adore the detail in this picture all together. Lovely job!
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