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Rizzy-25 — Zebra Lady

Published: 2008-06-29 14:58:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 220; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 0
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Description Not good. It was for school
It looks like I have a weird fetish for zebras...i don't!

2007.
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Comments: 3

PleaseHush [2008-06-29 15:11:48 +0000 UTC]

Wow, you've done the designs REALLY well. Zebra fetish or not, the designs look excellent. The shading for the clothes also looks very well-done.

I hope you don't mind if I give you a healthy critique?

Take a look at the skin. Do you notice how different the skin's texture looks when you compare the arm to the collar bone to the forehead? Our skin can be rougher or smoother in some places, but not to that extend.

What brings a drawing to life is the eyes - here, I assume that you intended the eyes to have a penetrating stare. It did not work so well, though. The eyes do not look alive. Work on giving eyes a spark of life that makes drawings look alive.

Overall, this drawing pops out - which is great! Nobody wants their art to blend in with everyone else's. You've done a great job. I'd love to see you improve in the areas that I've mentioned.

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Rizzy-25 In reply to PleaseHush [2008-06-29 15:18:44 +0000 UTC]

Thanks and thanks for the critique

My teacher said some of the same things you said such as the arms look quite flat compared to the rest of the body

I will try and correct it...when I get it back from the school!

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PleaseHush In reply to Rizzy-25 [2008-06-29 16:24:26 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome. The correcting is not the important part. Learning is.

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