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Published: 2011-09-27 06:01:11 +0000 UTC; Views: 192728; Favourites: 1735; Downloads: 2402
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Description Ok, don't worry yourselves everyone. This is not a drill. Due to Deviant Art's word cap, I realized a bunch of edits going into my story have not been getting updated. So, I made a Google Doc which you can follow here docs.google.com/document/d/1Nw… or an actual hyperlinky thingy below in the description. I was gonna just delete this and re-post something about it, but with so many of you commenting I was just overcome by your words. So, I wanted to keep them so that I can remember you all! Thanks!

Also, for additional fan work (art, writings, etc) check out my favorite gallery called "My Little Dashie Fan Work" here robcakeran53.deviantart.com/fa…
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Comments: 2807

Jas5576 [2017-01-10 08:57:46 +0000 UTC]

dude

i looked at the start



and i was just liek--




'is this a fukin copypasta or some shit'

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PAX-12 [2016-08-02 07:22:25 +0000 UTC]

If you guys haven't watched the movie by StormFX3 WTF are you doing.

Also the fan made sequel readings by Derpypony22.

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Pancake-nerd [2016-06-17 17:56:36 +0000 UTC]

when i read the story it was really amazing but why does it say my little doofusdashie?

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FobosAltar [2016-05-24 18:00:19 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful story, man. I love it.

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Donsssssss [2015-12-08 02:52:51 +0000 UTC]

Best fanfiction, and fictional story, I've ever read. You have no idea what this did to me. Β 

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CloudWhisp29 [2015-10-04 16:32:57 +0000 UTC]

You do not know how many times I cried in this story.

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TimGoneMad [2015-05-12 21:44:16 +0000 UTC]

I released the occasional sigh and maybe a single tear or two, but I was able to hold myself together while reading it. I guess the effects would have lasted longer if I had not read the "official" sequel only a few hours later, but it was still a heartstring-tugger. And while the sequel was written by another, I still enjoyed it.

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DNCSP [2015-05-02 19:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Totally forgot to fave this awesome story...Β 

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Shawntheimmortal94 [2015-04-01 00:37:16 +0000 UTC]

I just want to say...Thank you...thank you and everyone who was a part of this,the movie and the fanfiction...It's a fucking masterpiece and I'm not even a brony but I enjoyed myself...I smiled...I laughed and...I cried...It's my favorite fanfic and my favorite movie...

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SiIverQuilI [2014-11-26 07:21:42 +0000 UTC]

Excuse me, could you email this wonderful, tear shedding story so I can read it anywhere without requiring WIFI?

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PonyishLimbo [2014-11-14 15:25:54 +0000 UTC]

What should happen? Deus ex machina should happen.

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CrazyGraeHawkatoo [2014-06-26 05:35:01 +0000 UTC]

A fan-made, live action mini movie has been made based on this fanfic! Β Congratulations, man, bro, pal!Β 

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Okami-Sarachi [2014-05-28 22:52:02 +0000 UTC]

*Crying* This story....has....changer my life.......Huhuhuuhuh

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UlvenAspiration [2014-02-03 20:30:30 +0000 UTC]

u seemed to have it right, but i couldn't help but laugh. then i came down and cried in the mirror. then i went to school with allergies and had to make too may witty puns to keep myself upbeat.

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FlyingNeko105 [2014-01-02 02:54:29 +0000 UTC]

Dear god, that story was powerful! I cried

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MetroXLR [2013-12-19 12:47:46 +0000 UTC]

This is the Perfect song for this fanfic: www.youtube.com/watch?v=UY_BMq…

I just dare you to read 'My Little Dashie',
while listening to this song..and, NOT cry (if somehow you CAN, then you have no soul.)

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UlvenAspiration In reply to MetroXLR [2014-02-03 20:29:00 +0000 UTC]

i luaghed through the whole mini movie, then came down off of the mlp high and cried in the mirror for a minute or 24601.

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Kool-aid2 [2013-11-19 08:47:50 +0000 UTC]

I rarely ever get teary eyed, much less cry. With that said, this is a story that actually got me to cry at the end. The letter is what finally got me.

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RoadieTurbo [2013-11-11 06:01:14 +0000 UTC]

hey man I know I commented in Gdoc but the fact you kept the main character nameless is brilliant because it means at times you can put yourself (meaning both the reader and the creator) into the story.

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RoadieTurbo In reply to RoadieTurbo [2013-11-11 06:07:16 +0000 UTC]

and I do honestly hope you find a way to continue this work, there's already a few sequels off your stories (as you may have already seen and possibly read) and maybe work with the other writers who have been inspired by your awesome work, I've read one in particular that shows especially high promise.

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andrestar [2013-11-03 07:20:54 +0000 UTC]

amazing , you sir are AMAZING!!!!!

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ElementShimmer [2013-11-02 03:50:05 +0000 UTC]

This story is amazing i cant wait to be a father it inspred meso much thank you <3 Β ps Β i cried alot

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bubbles46853 [2013-11-01 02:28:10 +0000 UTC]

Congrats.

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ShadowKitsuun [2013-10-16 23:33:31 +0000 UTC]

You are the best author I've ever had the honor of reading. I know you get this a lot, but you had me crying at the end. The line "...Just how could I blame somepony?" was what got me. For everyone who finished it, you know I'm telling the truth when I say that from that line on, following the amazing story up to it, is one of the most heartfelt moments ever put into words. I left the longer comment on WaltzBrony's comic's end, but it applies here too. Others describe it better than I did, but the emotions are still there, Brony or not.

To you all I need to say one thing over all else:

Thank You.

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LittleRaven2010 [2013-08-16 03:15:31 +0000 UTC]

I was crying so hard by then end. It is a truly amazing story! The emotions that are expressed would make anyone relate to it! Thank you for this epic, moving story!

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Obsidiandovah [2013-08-09 01:18:04 +0000 UTC]

This stop was not even sad.. I did not cried.. I laughed. I know. I have no soul. Honestly if they all died it would have been a better ending...














Hate mail/death threats incoming in 5.4.3.2.1..

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thatguywhosaysstuff In reply to Obsidiandovah [2014-03-17 00:32:09 +0000 UTC]

Flagged as Spam

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Obsidiandovah In reply to thatguywhosaysstuff [2014-03-24 23:10:09 +0000 UTC]

HuehuehueΒ 

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Obsidiandovah In reply to Obsidiandovah [2013-08-09 01:18:30 +0000 UTC]

*story*

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elarachubs [2013-08-01 22:38:22 +0000 UTC]

So Much Liquid Pride... TOT

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Kachirinka [2013-07-22 04:52:00 +0000 UTC]

Omg... I was crying....

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Mlpegasista300 [2013-07-11 20:39:22 +0000 UTC]

So much mixed up feelings *sniff* I just heard it on mic on YouTube ;~;

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earlydeets [2013-07-10 08:25:52 +0000 UTC]

I kept telling myself things would get better then my luck was turned around now I feel whole again just thought id share the wealth
[link]

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dhaka2k [2013-07-09 22:46:44 +0000 UTC]

I found an easy answer to our problems. Look at this I already started
[link]

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mick8789 [2013-07-09 19:49:31 +0000 UTC]

I had reached the end of the line I took my chances with this now I make all the calls just picture the possibilities
[link]

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Raincen [2013-07-09 15:33:57 +0000 UTC]

Make money in the Internet. We show you how it works
[link]

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ganjababy123456789 In reply to Raincen [2013-09-11 17:28:21 +0000 UTC]

Fagbot.

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vietkatz [2013-07-08 23:06:22 +0000 UTC]

Ive decided no more diets! Try this
[link]

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Obsidiandovah In reply to vietkatz [2013-08-09 01:18:48 +0000 UTC]

Fake

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FlutterGuy227 [2013-07-05 06:22:30 +0000 UTC]

This was the story that sealed me into the brony fandom forever.

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jnada1 [2013-07-01 08:37:57 +0000 UTC]

So sad... Very well written.

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UnikittyttikZ [2013-06-25 16:05:08 +0000 UTC]

That was the absolute most emotional fanfic I have ever read and it actually made me cry. This was an awe inspiring, amazing, heartfelt, piece of work, and I feel that you should be an author when you grow up. The best books, the best series, the best fanfics, they're emotional and make you feel the rainbow of emotions. You have tapped into this magical writing power with this fanfic and you deserve an award. This....this was one of the best things ever. It hurt to read it, but I'm glad I had the opportunity to experience something so great and heartfelt.

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BlowinUpThePhone [2013-06-02 06:00:19 +0000 UTC]

SO MUCH LIQUID PRIDE

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MasterEric1 [2013-06-01 04:23:38 +0000 UTC]

my friend told me about this fanfic and all i can say is....this is just so beautiful it almost made me cry

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AirHit [2013-05-26 05:38:28 +0000 UTC]

You should make an ending cause I cant sleep. I keep thinking how would it end for dashie and will they ever see each other again, and how would it happen if I would find Dashie on the street like that. The only thing I can say about that is that teaching her how to fly would be even harder cause of the nearby airport thats owned by the military.

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AirHit [2013-05-25 18:28:38 +0000 UTC]

There are two things on the internet that should be spncered by tissue companies.
First thing are great stories like this that make people cry and probably think about it every day.
And the other thing is porn.

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Cenitopius [2013-05-23 18:39:46 +0000 UTC]

I feel the need to say this now.
I read this story years ago - it's part of my past. I used to be part of my older brother's group of friends because I had no real friends for my own. I used to spend day after day in classes literally afraid that if I didn't sit perfectly still and answer my questions and do my work and get perfectly average levels then I'd be bullied. Because it was true. I spent all day every day in fear.
I would come home and play video games until it was time to eat, then I'd eat, then I'd sleep. Weekends were only good because they meant that I had more time to play video games.
My older brother's friend discovers MLP and they all watched the first episode for the first time together. I was so closed up and stubborn and unchangeable and afraid of anything new that I didn't bother looking at it until a few months later.
Magic.
I forget what it was for but I was already reading fan fictions. I looked, after some time, for some MLP fanfictions and I saw a few. None of them really interested me that much but I liked some of them a lot.
It took me about another month after reading MLP fan fictions to decide to give this 'My Little Dashie' that everyone was using as the set standard for the god of fan fictions.
And I did. And I cried. And I made my little brother read it. And I cried again, and again, and again that night while I was trying to sleep, and again that next day, all the way through school I didn't speak because I was scared there'd be nothing come out but cries. I spent 6 hours of school with tears in my eyes. Silent trip back home. Silent day, lying down.
I just couldn't. I couldn't comprehend, I couldn't talk, I couldn't focus or listen or play or work or anything.
I didn't know it then but I was breaking my shell.
Since then I've made more friends than I can count or remember the names of. I've joined a band, I listen to music all the time, I read fics and write fics and read books and sometimes write short stories as well, but not novels.
I got more adventurous - ate new food, drank new drinks, left the house (literally the first time I went outdoors away from school in years), got a girlfriend - perhaps not the best example because I couldn't get her to leave the house and she dumped me because her friend hated me for no reason 6 weeks later and I don't count it as a relationship which means that in my opinion I've never had a girlfriend, but oh well - I got attached to people - see before rant - I got attached to things, I gathered a draw full of memories, I lost friends, I lost family, I got a new computer desk and treated it like it was made of gold - use a god damn coaster, please and thank you - went to Greece, made friends there, came back to GB, made friends in America - the internet is a wonderful place - lost contact with friends in America, regained contact with those same friends in America and became the god damn king of advice giving to friends - most of it's ignored and I let them graze their knee for it, but oh well - so on so forth.
I just want to tell you that if it weren't for this fiction, and I think of this fiction every damn day, I wouldn't be where I am today.
Given, I'm in the middle of one of those stupid moments where you fall in love and compliment the girl all the time (long god damn story and I'll not bore you with it), but that's not bad, that's good, because two years ago I couldn't talk to my best friend. Hell, I couldn't talk to my own brother, and we'd shared a room for 10 years before we moved and now I feel depressed on the days he spends all his time with his girlfriend and I can't talk to him, but it doesn't matter because I love life!
Thank you - you didn't just let me live, care, love and bear through bad times, but the chances are that by now if I hadn't read this story, I'd of started thinking more like I do now and thought that a life without feeling where I have to suppress my schoolwork - which is now, thanks to you, doing so well I'm getting A's B's and C's in the tests that I'm meant to be doing in 2 years (which means - if I learnt as slow as average people did - I'd be getting straight A*'s when I do take the tests) - which is what I spend a third of my life working on just so I don't feel like dying, I would of decided a life like that isn't worth living.
But now I realize that I could be the one to find a Dashie on the pavement. Everyone is likely to find a Dashie on the pavement sooner or later, and that's worth living for!
I want to live thanks to you, I want to love thanks to you, I want love thanks to you and I know who I want love from thanks to you.
You didn't just save one life in saving mine though - I'm working on my grades and I'm going to become a medical doctor specializing in diagnostics. I'm going to save more people's lives, and when they thank me, I'll be telling them not to thank me, I'll be telling them to thank Dr. Rob Cakeran because there's never going to be anyone called Dr. Rob Cakeran in the hospital and they'll have to Google him and there's a good chance they'll find this, and if they do then they might read it and be happy and it could let them cope with whatever disabilities or irreversible effects they have, and then you'll of helped someone again.
It'll be a longshot every time, but every time I save someone who's got their life at risk, and every time they thank me I'll tell 'em it was all Dr. Rob Cakeran's doing and that they should find him on the computer at home because he doesn't come in right now.
So again, thank you, thank you, thank you, because you've saved my life and the quality of my life, and you'll save thousands and thousands more to come.

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The-Son-Named-Moon In reply to Cenitopius [2013-05-26 08:06:01 +0000 UTC]

I can say I'm on my way to having a life like yours my friend, but right now I am sadly at the first "Break up" ^^"

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Cenitopius In reply to The-Son-Named-Moon [2013-05-26 19:55:17 +0000 UTC]

I don't really count my first relationship as a relationship it was so bad, but I can help ya through it if you need. I had mine 9 months ago now and I'm well over it and into the final stage of pushing the same chick away now because she's been wanting me back these last 6 months. Shoot me a note if you want any help.

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RainbowDashArtist [2013-05-21 03:20:18 +0000 UTC]

cool

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