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RoboticMasterMind — Spatter arena pg 2
Published: 2011-04-04 06:41:24 +0000 UTC; Views: 1713; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 15
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Okay pg 2 of the splatter arena comic of Crome vs LexLex was super hard to draw and I think I forgot her cape
Crome (c) me
Lex (c)
Pg. 1 [link]
Pg. 2 here
Pg. 3 [link]
Pg. 4 [link]
Pg. 5 [link]
Pg. 6 [link]
Pg. 7 [link]
Pg. 8 [link]
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Great work as usual I love your art work you such an amazing job
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Epic as usual. I like the poses and the angles. And the laser glowy is cool. Same thing applies here as with the other comic. Tiny font in tiny boxes makes it hard to read!!
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Yeah I need to try to work on the font, I was trying to make the boxes look right in places. I'm a real n00b when it comes to comics so I'm trying to improve.
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I'm sure you can figure it out ^_^
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wooooow! I am so impressed by your art style! I hope I get to go up against you in future rounds! X3
(though I'll admit, I'm scared)
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Thanks I've seen your sketch too and it looks like it's coming along pretty great and will anticipate it's completion. I hope I can get past this round too to fight in the future rounds also XP. I don't don't think it's no need to be scared I just started making comics so I'm a n00b at it.
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I just finished it a little bit ago. X3 I'm pleased with the result.
XD I've got a bit of experience with comics from blood sport, but I'm still sucky-ish with them and I have no idea if I can make it within the time limit because of finals and I have a zillion term papers to do. =3=; I hope that maybe possibly we can get an extension...
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You're not the only one that have a bazillion of papers due, I am extremely behind in college and need to complete them ASAP before the beginning of may. I might need a extension also because I'm not trying to make this comic a short quick fight, more of a strategic battle for survival for my oc along with stupid afthermath comics where he explores the abandoned city in between the fights. I might look at that too because I'm interested to how your comic looks XP
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same here with everything needing to be done before may. =3=; We should ask together for an extension!! 8D After all, at least two people sound better than one whining about needing more time. I already mentioned to faux that I'd probably need more time than a monthish. =3=;
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Yeah I should ask since I don't know when I'll get my school work done. Plus my opponent has a extremely difficult oc to draw and that makes it even tougher and more time consuming.
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Yeah @_@; difficult opponents are always more annoying to draw, especially on a tight time limit. We've got an extension by a week. More would be lovely, but I'm not complaining right now. XD;
hey do you have any messenger services? 8D
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I just got a messager a couple weeks ago and still new at it. My email is RoboticMasterMind@hotmail.com
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*shoots email*
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Another great page, the only thing I could pick out is the last panel is worded a bit awkwardly... people usually use the shortened phrase, instead of you will, you'll.
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Yeah I might need to fix that a little since I kinda thought it'll look funny if written like that. I was thinking that "you'll" might not be a proper word though I think it does sound a little slow at the end with *you will".
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Most people wouldn't say she will/he will/it will.
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Nice- really acurate portrayal of Lex.
Everyone who's ever tried to draw her has yelled at me aterward for making her uniform so dang complicated.
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Thanks she was really to hard to draw to tell you the truth, and the uniform is pretty dang tough. Though I've been drawing difficult stuff for a while so it wasn't so complicated that I had to erase everything 100 times.
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Heh, yeah, I have a nasty tendancy to overcomplicate my characters. I'm practicing animation and am struggling cuz the characters I want to use are so difficult to draw repeatedly.
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(Wow, did I really just use the word "dang"?)
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(Not the word Zap, just on that little box. His feet look weird, not Zap)
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Looks like Crome has a pretty good challenge. Its not a mary-sue so shell be a bit harder to kill off, but Asaila and I know Crome pretty well, and are pretty sure he can take her. And I shall give you a little advise since I noticed something. I would practice way Cromes feet go back when he jumps. Where it says "Zap" it looks kinda weird. Not bad, just a little weird. Other than that, great job. Asaila Will be rooting for you
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I know it does look weird I hated that panel the most, and yeah that means Lex won't die horribly she'll have a clean death. Still I'll hate to kill someone's oc but it's a competition so it'll have to happen.
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Just remember, theyre killing yours too
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Get 'em Crome!!! *sits behind metal box and watches*
Neat, and who in the right mind would shoot Crome?!
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Someone desperate to live and win splatter arena. Though that was a death wish to shoot him
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Aw, how cute.... NOW GET HER CROME!
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Thanks this comic was a pain in the ass, though I like how it came except the explosion panel. I don't like that one, Crome's body looks weird.
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You're welcome!
Ah, yeah, I see that... He looks...
Really bendy. ;^;
Otherwise the page is pretty much perfect. :D
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Hah hah, wow, they really let 'em run loose in this arena! Right after he lands!
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Crome registered in splatter arena's computers and I think the staff didn't want to meet him in person since they pulled up a whole record of his past up and decided it would be better to start ASAP
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*ROFLs* Sounds about right!
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Thanks, shows how much Crome likes calling things name and soon comes the swearing throughout the arena event XP
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