Hakyness3876 [2011-03-10 18:26:54 +0000 UTC]
Oooh! This is an intriguing poem. It covers a huge variety of subjects but it is united by a singular, surprisingly powerful voice.
I like the lines:
"one sunflower
is sufficient to illuminate any World in which they choose to hold power"
"careful their back-stabbing fingertips don't touch one another"
and
"bitter afterbirth of miscarried faith."
And the repetition of "the bridges of their nostrils" is very eerie and mysterious. Makes me wonder about the narrator.
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