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RedBlueIsCool [2016-04-15 21:35:23 +0000 UTC]
"Will you leave me alone now?" is what she's thinking.
I dunno, the ARK may be all she's known, so even though she yearns to see more it musn't be easy imagining something on the outside.
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RockmanGurl In reply to RedBlueIsCool [2016-04-16 02:52:06 +0000 UTC]
Perhaps, yet I imagine that she probably would get more and more tired of it overtime in the sense that she truly is trapped there.
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pikachufangirl1 [2016-04-15 02:51:18 +0000 UTC]
Great page! THe only thing I have to ask is this: Are you aware that one of Maria's missing one of her shoes in panel 6? In the WIP of this page that you posted yesterday, she had both shoes on. (I have a tendency to notice little details like that). Anyways, aside from that minor detail, this page truly showed Maria's strong side and how much she truly cares about Shadow despite his heritage. If Gerald had witnessed this, I'm sure he'd be proud of her. Too bad I can't say the same for Black Doom, though... If looks could kill, well... you get the point. Overall, awesome page, can't wait for the next one! And keep up the great work with Black Convergance on FanFiction.net!
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RockmanGurl In reply to pikachufangirl1 [2016-04-15 03:07:00 +0000 UTC]
She has both shoes, the speech bubble's just covering it.
Thank you so much for your input on both this and the story I've got going on there!
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pikachufangirl1 In reply to RockmanGurl [2016-04-15 03:15:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh, sorry! I thought that her left knee was actually her hidden foot for some odd reason (me: I feel like giving a :-P to myself ). And no problem, I enjoy reading fanfics and comics that involve Shadow's past even if Shadow himself has little involvement in the story.
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PurpleComet5 [2016-04-15 01:31:24 +0000 UTC]
Show him your power, Maria!!!
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Kirashadraws99 [2016-04-15 00:43:32 +0000 UTC]
That's right Maria! >:3
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