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pink-x [2009-05-03 16:16:21 +0000 UTC]
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Wow, very beautiful! I love the twist on the old Disney scene too!
The vision is amazing. Love the way the color all blend together, glad you didn't use black hair. It wouldn't have fit properly. The way she pops out of the picture is wonderful, and the lighting is great.
I'm glad you flipped the picture, it just fits better going this way, because the human mind reads things left to right, so you see the girl first, and not the grass and water.
I love the anatomy of this, everything is properly fitting, and great. Although, the shading on the arms is a little off, and makes it look a little flat. Other than that great job.
The only downside to this is the originality. I've seen this kind of thing before, and that is the only bad thing I can see about this.
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pseudolirium [2009-05-03 02:12:31 +0000 UTC]
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This is truly beautiful! I enjoy the subject matter a lot, and how you interpreted/tweaked a famous Disney scene. e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
I'm really glad that you gave her bright glowing hair instead of black hair, as the black wouldn't have matched the color balance. That being said, the color scheme is fantastic, with the warmer green-blues juxtaposed against the colder blues. The eye just follows the painting in smooth manner.
I also think you made a good choice on flipping the image, for some reason, viewing it from this side reads better. I can't quite pinpoint why-- it might have to do with the direction of the grass.
As far as the anatomy goes, it's really good in terms of proportion. I think the shading makes some areas seem very flat though, such as her left arm. The arms seem too dark as well, seeing as the intensity of the bottom light source is fairly weak in comparison with her head.
The whole picture, while magical, sort of lacks a magical air to it. For example, there seems to be a light source from below the water, but the water is murky. I see some suggestions of giving her a solid reflection, and I second that sentiment.
The glows around could be a little stronger too, and I feel that the grass in front should also have a sliver of light at the edges from her hair. Perhaps to increase the mystical mood, some glowing lights or such could be sprayed into the air.
Haha I can't believe I even touched your painting, but I can't quite explain in words, but hopefully this sufficiently illustrates what I want to say: [link]
Overall the painting is great, I admire your technique a lot! e.deviantart.com/emoticons/s/s⦠" width="15" height="15" alt="" title=" (Smile)" />
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Roggles In reply to pseudolirium [2009-05-03 02:39:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks!
i started off with what u you showed in ur edit, but i toned it down a lot because it flattens the image.
it did have loads of sparkly bits, but i wanted it to be subtle ^^,
plus the hair, its not intentionally glowing, it just emits a glow but its not reflective 8_D if u know what i mean... thats why id doesnt bounce back and forth with its surroundings. say... like the film star dust.
also, the she is not the light source, just to clarify that XD.... the water is...
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Roggles In reply to pseudolirium [2009-05-03 02:52:27 +0000 UTC]
no probs! thanks for the critique too ^^
gladly appreciated 8)
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Nyiana-sama [2009-05-02 15:27:50 +0000 UTC]
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Wow! This is simply an amazing piece. You're a very skilled artist and I've loved your works for quite some time now. Let me start off by saying, that I love the colors in this picture. They give a bit of a mysterious vibe off, at least to me.
The girl looks really well drawn out. Your anatomy is is excellent and she doesn't look to be out of balance anywhere. Truly well done.
One thing that I've noticed is that even though the reflection on her hair is bright, the water really doesn't reflect that. This could be from watching the Lion King too many times, but when Simba was in a situation like this, you could see his whole reflection in the water, but with her you can barely make it out. Especially since her hair is so bright, it just feels as if you should be able to see the reflection a little bit better.
There's also something about the background, the way the tall grass ends bothers me a little. There isn't anything beyond it, such as a moon or anything in the distance. In my opinion, it just feels as if something should be there.
Overall, this painting is extremely well done, and one of the best that I have looked at in a long time. You are a very skilled artist, and you demonstrate that in this piece, and each piece that you create. Keep up the amazing work in the future.
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foreverrussia1 [2009-05-02 14:36:08 +0000 UTC]
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Very, very beautiful. The lining and everything on the actuall person. The light is so well drawn, like how it radiates arund her head and how it glows in her hair and then fades away into darkness. The shadows are also very nice, noticable not overtoned and perfectly fine lines and lighting, on every feature of the girl. I especially like how the bottom part of her dress glows and how the actual dress is well textured. The thing is, everything else around her is somewhat incomplete. You feel theres something missing. The little lighting on her legs and the slight little waves on the water are the end of it. The grass is really well made but you could see that it has some lag, it's artificial and not finely drawn, the lines aren't as thin as they are on the girl, separating them into two seperate dimensions instead of putting them in the same place, in fact, although the BACK grass is beautiful, it looks flat and 2 dimennsional, while the girl is everything but that. The front grass would be perfectly fine if only the lines were a bit less thick, a bit more detailed and again, a bit more fine like the lines on the girl's dress. Overall, it's very beautiful including the small flaws. But these flaws have dramatic affect on an image like this one. Aside from that. It's a perfect picture. Sorry if I'm being strict. I'm a terrible critic!
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Roggles In reply to Angilram [2009-05-02 14:32:51 +0000 UTC]
chaars, im gonna try to fix that now 8)
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Angilram In reply to Roggles [2009-05-02 14:35:51 +0000 UTC]
Sorry... ^_^!
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Roggles In reply to Angilram [2009-05-02 14:40:06 +0000 UTC]
haha dont be! thanks XD
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shadowdollcat [2015-07-08 02:21:37 +0000 UTC]
So beautiful her glow is so ethereal...I love her...
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BarkinginTheDark [2015-04-25 06:11:30 +0000 UTC]
It reminds me of the pool in the Lion King where Simba sees his/Mufasa's reflection.
This is gorgeous and just simply amazing.
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Lollipopfop [2015-03-27 15:49:11 +0000 UTC]
I love it. Its like the hair lis glowing, but its not the only source of lightβ¦it makes the whole thing more mysterious then if it was rendered as if the hair was a light bulb.
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Hour27 [2013-10-27 04:11:25 +0000 UTC]
cooooooooolllll...
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AnnaLoo91 [2013-08-11 05:25:34 +0000 UTC]
What a beautiful picture! I love how her his is being reflected , it looks like it's shining!Β
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WolfStaronChild14 [2013-05-26 02:59:46 +0000 UTC]
This is a picture that inspired an important character in my story, I finally found this picture again!
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Moon-Flower4022 [2013-05-15 02:00:30 +0000 UTC]
It's so beautiful! The perfection can hardly be described.
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MaoShizuo [2013-03-28 20:05:30 +0000 UTC]
Wow ... that's very nice.
I really like this Pic. <3
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Hylee [2012-11-25 05:52:49 +0000 UTC]
I noticed. also kind of reminded me of Tangled when her hair started glowing.
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rocknjade77 [2012-11-12 11:28:52 +0000 UTC]
this is absolutely gorgeous~!
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AlexKlein [2012-10-24 20:07:19 +0000 UTC]
awesome *w*
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aaawhyme [2012-09-24 08:15:17 +0000 UTC]
I love the pose, and this is beautiful.
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xxOrangeNekoxx [2012-08-25 00:13:17 +0000 UTC]
wow! shes really pretty
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AthenaTT [2012-07-18 22:20:00 +0000 UTC]
Gorgeous!
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EdgeOfDestruction [2012-07-09 04:59:09 +0000 UTC]
Hahahhaa! Nice one she is amazing along with the background and this kind of depicts a firefly watching the water! and it is so peaceful much like the upper mountain pond when it is in the rainy season!
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FaeryofDreams [2012-07-08 22:43:50 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful, I love her hair!
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sooner-or-later [2012-06-29 23:19:07 +0000 UTC]
Realy beautiful
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Hazel-Fibonacci [2012-05-21 00:37:50 +0000 UTC]
Lovely! I really like the glow, the ripples and the rock!
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Liquid-Sun [2012-05-20 02:34:49 +0000 UTC]
This is looks very beautiful! ^^
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A-AA-A00 [2012-04-26 23:18:48 +0000 UTC]
gorgeous o3o
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ExileFallen [2012-04-16 00:27:37 +0000 UTC]
NICE!
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Wimers [2012-04-09 01:47:52 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful work man!!! Congratulations!!
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Miss-Golden [2012-04-07 12:17:21 +0000 UTC]
is this a magic ? you charmed me *_*
fantastic work !
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Elzbun [2011-12-22 21:51:41 +0000 UTC]
I knew the background was from lion kind!!! Awesome picture! I LOVE the hair! ^_^
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Yui1 [2011-10-01 08:23:38 +0000 UTC]
Wow!
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monstercoyote [2011-09-15 00:10:02 +0000 UTC]
It Looks Like Naruto's Mom. XD But Blue
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aladden [2011-09-05 18:41:47 +0000 UTC]
great job
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Vaejoun [2011-08-16 18:36:52 +0000 UTC]
I suddenly have to think of a certain scene from the Lion king XD. Great piece.
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