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RogueDragon — Mission Vao- unfinished proj
Published: 2005-10-13 18:59:44 +0000 UTC; Views: 2345; Favourites: 31; Downloads: 35
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Mission Vao from Star Wars Knights of the Old Republic. This is part of a larger Kotor picture I want to do. I actually did this a little hurriedly, I want some thoughts... I know the pose is awkward, but there's no easy way to fix it. Actually... poses like this are almost always awkward.The age in this picture I'm thinking is about 23.
Help me!
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I love the lighting/shading effects you used on her skin- it looks great.
Her head looks a little large, but maybe that's because it's 'closer' to us than the rest of her body?
Great work!
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Very nice work, it's a great pose to work with. Since you asked for the advanced crit, the only thing I see is that were you to convert this to greyscale, all of your shadows and highlights would register at about the same tone. Some areas of light always remain darker than others and likewise with shadow and it's best to save the most dramatic values for a few key areas. Hope that makes sense
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Wow, thanks, I hadn't thought of that!
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no prob, it's something I struggle with myself
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Yaaaayyy, Mission! ^_^ She's funstuffs 
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I think you did really well with the pose, excellent in fact. But like other people have said, her head is too big. Perhaps you could add a few more darker folds in the clothing too. Hope that helps.
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it does, thank you!
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The problems I can see are the head's too big and the right foot is a little off from the coloring of the left.
But her skin looks great and the detail on the outfit is spectacular!
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The legs are going to drive me nuts! But thanks for pointing out the areas that need focus. I tend to just look at it and think, "ack! it's all horrible but I don't want to even dare start over!" Thanks for the comments on my Juhani pic. And I love your Kotor pic. Bastila is especially awesome! I love her hair!
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Hee , no problems! I have the same 'ack, it's awful' thoughts with my work all the time!
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Really?
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GASP REALLY?! YAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY 
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I really like the colouring, especially on her skin. The pose is awesome but I think her head is a bit big.
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did you make her skin darker? her heads still too big.
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oka, I can already think of a thousand things I'd like to change
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