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RowanWithAPen [2019-05-19 17:45:58 +0000 UTC]
Hey there! I'm here from ProjectComment and I think your piece is really good. The scales look good at any distance (Some people do their scales too small and colour them incorrectly and ruin the effect but you have not done that, which I think is very good.) What I will say is don't be afraid to use darker tones when trying to convey iridescence, because iridescence is usually on a completely black tone (Oil, Beetle shells etc) or on a completely clear base (Like on soap bubbles). Adding some dark blues, purples or even blacks could make the scales seem a lot more detailed, but I will admit that that is a LOT of detail especially for a non digital medium, and the dragon still looks really good without. Also, if you look more in depth at iridescence, you will see that the tones are comprised of lots of colours, that aren't necessarily complimentary to the overall colour, but add to the effect (hard to explain but if you look at close up iridescent objects then you'll see what I mean.) Regardless, your colour choice is really nice and has clear intentions. The dragon looks young and these colours really help exaggerate this. Good job!
When adding shadows to bright colours, its important to understand how these certain colours interact with light. The best way to do it is to take an object with similar colours as the one's you're using, hold it to the light so that different shadows are being cast onto it, and then take a PHOTO of it. This is because, a lot of the time, bright colours already have shadows on them, but your brain kinda automatically filters them out because you know the ACTUAL colour of the object. Try looking around your house at everything thats white, and if you really analyse the colour for what it is, you'll notice that most of the white objects in your house will be some distinguishable shade of grey, as opposed to white. You will always see these objects as white, because your brain knows they are, and when light is on them, they are definitely white, so you just automatically filter out the grey and just see it as white. The same logic applies here. Look at the phot of your object an look at what colours it is ACTUALLY made up of. Where shadows are cast onto your object, try and recreate that colour with the medium you're using, and that's the colour you need to use for your shadow. In addition to this, add white or very light shades of your chosen colour where your light source is, and this is how you get your effect. Its weird to do at first but you'll get the hang of it.
The form of the dragon is awesome, the only criticism I have is the wing. It shares the same light level as the arm and is also on the same plane as the arm, with no clear definition of shape, which makes the wing stand out less, and it looks more like a third arm before you realise its a dragons wing. The placement is fine, just maybe add a darker tone to where the wing connects to the dragons body to set it apart from the arm.
I really like the expression of the piece. You have conveyed a clear emotion of curiosity and eagerness with the butterfly and the piece is something thats really nice to look at. Its cute and fun, but that doesn't take away from the physical skill behind the piece, and I think that's really quite admirable!
Cant wait to see what you do next!
Keep up the fantastic work, you're a great artist
p.s.
What medium do you use. To me it looks like you've used oil pastels but I really can't tell
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RoleplayDragon2000 In reply to RowanWithAPen [2019-05-19 18:03:05 +0000 UTC]
Thank you for your thoughtful comment! This should help a lot! Out of curiosity, do you know anything that is iridecent in the way my dragon is? I wanted a photo, but had no idea what to use!
I use Prismacolor pencil, which is a wax-based artist quality colored pencil.
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ChatLunatique [2019-05-18 01:20:17 +0000 UTC]
The ventral scales brown color is a bit jarring compared to the cool purples blues and greens you have going elsewhere. It makes them look more stuck on, than part of the dragon's body. The color gradient is really nice otherwise. I really like how the bright green next to the purple body scales gives the dorsal membranes a translucent look.
Shadow colors would depend largely on the background colors reflecting onto the shaded parts, but I'm far from good at shading myself, so I'll defer to someone else's opinion there.
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RoleplayDragon2000 In reply to myovada [2019-05-17 12:34:56 +0000 UTC]
The scales didn't take all that much time, I finished this piece in about five or six hours. Typically, my pieces take anywhere from 10 to 15. The drawing is only 6.5" X 8.5", the scales are actually quite small!
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demihime [2019-05-17 04:03:51 +0000 UTC]
The texture of the scales looks amazing~!
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