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RollingTomorrow — Sneaking in for Sweets
Published: 2010-11-13 17:29:34 +0000 UTC; Views: 2228; Favourites: 36; Downloads: 5
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Description Evil elves ate all my cupcakes.
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Comments: 59

RollingTomorrow In reply to ??? [2011-01-03 22:11:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank you!

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leoraigarath [2010-12-10 11:14:00 +0000 UTC]

Are they long eared, tall, pale elves or Santa's helpers?!
It is most important for me to understand where to find the cookies

On a more serious note, this story was very cute. It was like reading a 6-words Children Story, which is a very interesting take (and I think one of the firsts of the sort I read in this contest yet).

Good luck!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to leoraigarath [2011-01-12 02:56:34 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! It was fun to do something more light hearted and geared to all audiences.

And I think they were tall and long eared.

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leoraigarath In reply to RollingTomorrow [2011-01-12 08:56:33 +0000 UTC]

I agree!

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druidmuse [2010-12-04 06:44:51 +0000 UTC]

That sounds like a story I'd stick to,..., yep,..., (munch, munch, munch), ..., (burrrrrp!!!) , not me, the elves did it all right (oooooouch!, who pinched me???, OOOOOOUCH!, RUN!!!, HELP, ..., STOP!!!, Owwww, PLEASE MAKE THEM STOP!!!!!!, I'LL BEEEEEE GOOOOOOOOOOOD) < Strangeness ends here, thank goodness.)

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RollingTomorrow In reply to druidmuse [2011-01-03 22:12:53 +0000 UTC]

Thanks for reading! XD

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OritPetra [2010-11-20 06:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Here is a cookie to make you feel better :



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RollingTomorrow In reply to OritPetra [2010-11-25 01:22:06 +0000 UTC]

Cookie!

Thank you!

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MysticalAngel101 [2010-11-20 00:31:08 +0000 UTC]

Damn those evil elves!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to MysticalAngel101 [2010-11-25 01:17:21 +0000 UTC]

They're such evil elves!

But thank you for reading! May no elves steal your sweets this holiday season!

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PhsycoTatie [2010-11-20 00:13:25 +0000 UTC]

Omg!!!Thyey ate your cupcakes?!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to PhsycoTatie [2010-11-22 15:38:45 +0000 UTC]

They certainly did! Those elves have quite a sweet tooth.

Thanks for commenting!

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PhsycoTatie In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-22 16:20:05 +0000 UTC]

lol.ur welcome

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RollingTomorrow In reply to PhsycoTatie [2011-03-15 19:43:25 +0000 UTC]

Thanks again!

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celestial-elevator [2010-11-19 22:42:08 +0000 UTC]

Wow, this made me smile. Thank you

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RollingTomorrow In reply to celestial-elevator [2010-11-22 15:38:56 +0000 UTC]

Aww, no problem! XD I'm glad you enjoyed reading.

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LegionaryMario [2010-11-16 06:49:08 +0000 UTC]

So much evil in this story....

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RollingTomorrow In reply to LegionaryMario [2010-11-25 01:13:11 +0000 UTC]

They are very evil little elves!

But thank you for reading!

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MrsNox [2010-11-15 16:22:44 +0000 UTC]

This is amazingly funny for being so short! Do more of these!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to MrsNox [2010-11-25 01:13:52 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much! I definitely will, I'm so surprised with how well they're going over!

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Amontadillo [2010-11-15 13:48:51 +0000 UTC]

I like six word stories.
Nice one!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Amontadillo [2010-11-16 22:57:03 +0000 UTC]

Thank you very much! It was fun to write.

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Lorliei [2010-11-14 20:51:35 +0000 UTC]

I think this is the best six word story I've ever read.

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Lorliei [2010-11-16 22:57:17 +0000 UTC]

Thank you! There are a lot of entries in the contest now.

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alkalineuh [2010-11-14 07:09:42 +0000 UTC]

Damn elves. They're always doing that. Last week, they even got the bagels.

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RollingTomorrow In reply to alkalineuh [2010-11-14 14:31:45 +0000 UTC]

The bagels too?! Such greedy little elves!

Thank you and may no more devious elves steal your treats this holiday season!

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Diddle-chan In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-14 16:19:27 +0000 UTC]

And the cookies. >__<

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Diddle-chan [2010-11-15 15:51:06 +0000 UTC]

The cookies too...!

Devious little elves.

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Diddle-chan In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-16 13:57:41 +0000 UTC]

Devious indeed. D:

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Diddle-chan [2011-03-15 19:45:31 +0000 UTC]

<--- And probably making faces like that XDD

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Diddle-chan In reply to RollingTomorrow [2011-03-17 02:59:17 +0000 UTC]

*laughing my ass off*

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Diddle-chan [2011-08-10 07:10:39 +0000 UTC]

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DJChocolate-Lover [2010-11-13 21:47:28 +0000 UTC]

lol this brought a smile to my face.
Damn those elves

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RollingTomorrow In reply to DJChocolate-Lover [2010-11-14 02:37:57 +0000 UTC]

I'd be all , but they stole it all!

Ahem... XD

I'm very glad you found it entertaining! Thanks for reading!

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Itonami-Lumi [2010-11-13 21:44:20 +0000 UTC]

yes they did

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Itonami-Lumi [2010-11-14 14:30:43 +0000 UTC]

They certainly did... XD

Thanks for commenting, and may no devious little elves steal your treats this holiday season!

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Itonami-Lumi In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-14 14:54:34 +0000 UTC]

i hope they won't! ^^

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Itonami-Lumi [2010-11-15 15:51:25 +0000 UTC]

Protect your sweets, those elves are devious! XP

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Itonami-Lumi In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-15 21:38:39 +0000 UTC]

YUSH!!!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Itonami-Lumi [2010-12-10 21:20:21 +0000 UTC]

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IrishIleana [2010-11-13 20:45:09 +0000 UTC]

I usually delete all my notifications from #LiteraryArt.
Congrats for capturing my attention.

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RollingTomorrow In reply to IrishIleana [2010-11-14 02:30:33 +0000 UTC]

XD I'm glad this randomness caught your eye.

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Realian [2010-11-13 18:14:37 +0000 UTC]

I don't know why but I chuckle a lot at this lol

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RollingTomorrow In reply to Realian [2010-11-14 02:27:42 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you got a laugh out of it! That's basically what I was aiming for.

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erziban [2010-11-13 17:42:57 +0000 UTC]

I have met those evil elves....darn things!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to erziban [2010-11-13 17:49:22 +0000 UTC]

Did they steal your cupcakes and/or muffins too?

Thanks for commenting! XD

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erziban In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-13 18:10:28 +0000 UTC]

It was cookies and pie.....Damn them!

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RollingTomorrow In reply to erziban [2010-11-13 18:25:26 +0000 UTC]

They've stolen all types of sweets now!

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erziban In reply to RollingTomorrow [2010-11-13 19:55:45 +0000 UTC]

I sent an e-christmas card to a friend a few years back called "naughty elves" that your poem reminded me of...

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RollingTomorrow In reply to erziban [2010-11-14 02:26:54 +0000 UTC]

I wonder if those naughty elves stole baked goods as well...or perhaps something more devious!

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