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RoninsUltramix — Koden Page 1 Rewrite
Published: 2009-09-11 15:32:08 +0000 UTC; Views: 1145; Favourites: 38; Downloads: 35
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this is page 1 rewritten for the 4th time and think this is the look i wanted.Cameo: Reiha by ~Tofubeast
Page 2 coming up soon
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Comments: 5
nice touch with inking only parts, you missed the forehead/nose/jaw angle on the guy in first and second panels. since its the same guy he should have same features in these two, however nose and jaw are slightly different. keep up the great work
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two things: The guy in the first panel's eye just doesn't sit right with me, right away it just didn't look right; and he seems to move down the wall away from the opening (towards the viewer) in the third panel. He was right by the opening in the first two. I tell you these things because i care.
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I'm liking the backgrounds here, leaving them undefined does draw attention to the characters.
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Oh wow. I really like the linework here, as well as the cinematic sequential panels. I think you've nailed the style as well.
And also, yay, Reiha! : D
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