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Prologue of our soon to be named manga.
The Group Members
- Storyline, Design
- Storyline, Concept
- Arts and Design
- Arts and Design
- Colours
- Music Direction
- Game Design
Creative Team
Affiliates
This manga is created to be an outlet to all who want their ideas to be known and is open to suggestions. Suggestoins that will be picked is credited to it's sender and will automatically be joined to the creative team.
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Btw, rave, you gotta be careful with what you write in the image comment.
It's been to panels already where you write "our soon to be named manga". It has a name, it's Cursed!
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But i thought we agreed to leave it nameless till we launch the manga? We as the group and those reading the past journal are suppose to know it but for the rest of our readers it like james bond opening credits. Action first before the opening title!
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Nice twist. Definitely wasn't expecting an audience. ^_^
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Yay! Another page! I love how everything seems so shiny...
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Woaza. xD Good as always. I specially like the last panel.
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Riveting
*more popcorn and pizza guzzling in the stands*
That is such an awesome scene, and Oburu's little victory grin and the eyebrows are making me squee
And I second the increased advertising paraphenalia. ^^
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The blue kinda got me at first but it flowed after a bit. I like how the thoughts and speaking are both very clear, easy to follow. It's irritating when the words are hard to read, so this was refreshing.
Nice job on the blur to give the figures more speed and movement. Good storyline, and great ending to make what seemed like a battle to the death turn into a "friendly" competition instead.
Be cool to see some of the still images in the gallery put to action, Miyamoto Bennosuke would be great to see flow.
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Thank you so much! We put lots of efforts to our pages and are honored to be complemented by you!
A true privilege indeed!
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bad gramar, bad spelling... typos... oh how i wish there where an [edit] button :S
then again, i cant spell or use proper gramas anyways...
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great stuff, like'd how you made us (the readers) asuming it was some kind of classix one on one samurai standoff out in nowhere.
one thing tough. seeing as this is a world where the samurai/fighters are gettins sponsord by different corporations and stuff like that, should'nt that show... well not in the erlier pages of the prologe ofcourse, but in the rest the last frame.
I'm asuming the fight took place in an arena, and the once cheering are the audience... meaby some billbords? someone holding a slice of pizza? a bottle of bear? someone holding one of those little flags with there team name on it... you know, the way it actually would look at a corporate sponsord event...
blabedibla bla bla... im rambeling. time for me to get some sleep
Anyways! great job so far!
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True! That should have been done! We are really in this stage where things can be adjusted and should be discussed. You have an eye for these small articulate stuffs. If you're in DA often, you can be in the team as a page concept consultant, giving suggestions like what you have said just now.
We need someone to brainstorm with all the time when ideas are flying. You can be that someone! What do you say?
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wow another outstanding page,I can see this being turned into a Anime tv show thats how amazeing the story is. can't wait to see the next page.
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