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With this painting I'm very dissatisfied. In my opinion it had a good idea but it ended up being too eye candy and unorganized. That's why I just stopped.What do you think? How could I have improved it?
I would really appreciate some heavy sharp critique, because I feel this is a badly done kitsch.
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I go swooshy-loo and fshooo~
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AND FLOOO FLOOOOOOOOUUUUU 
But seriously...hair is like one of the most difficult part I just can't get. XD
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Hair is the simplest thing for me XD
It has no rules it goes where ever it wants (or I want)
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I think because it is so random that I just can't get it.
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Personally, I think this is pretty.
However, I do agree that it is possibly just eye candy.
There is no real depth in the painting as far as I can see. (at least at this point)
There is nothing wrong with a little eye candy here and there though.
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Nothing wrong with eyecandy things 
Heck! I love those sweet colorful cute arts!
Just that I had this feel that this particular painting could have gone better...
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I love her expression and the color of her hair 
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No problem darling 
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I do really like the girl, the hair, and the stars and moon in her hair. However, I think that the blue stars and yellow stars don't work very well together in this piece. The blue concentrates the energy of the picture over to the left. Perhaps what you could do is put more stars in the right part of the picture, but use a mix of blue and yellow stars (maybe with a higher concentration of blue stars to the left and yellow to the right, to give a sort of gradient effect).
Overall, I do really like this.
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The blue stars are separated from the yellow ones because the yellow ones are dirty. Like when you bathe and on side of the water is murky and the other is clearer.
But maybe a few more "dirty" stars would have done the trick... to balance things out?
Anyway, thank you very much for the comment and for the very nice words.
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I'm not an art critic, but I feel in my gut that the right side is a little empty(or, I don't know, "empty"). Could use some stars there, maybe. I'm really not sure, but I feel there's some imbalance there...
Other than that, I love this all this flowing hair. 
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At first there were more stars there... but it seemed a bit too loaded. Maybe I should have reduced more from the left side...?
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Maybe. Maybe distribute them around a bit.
But again, no art critic.
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I don't really have any critique or anything but I like it fine! I love the hair
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But I already waited 56 years. That is like 237 in dog years...
Two canine centuries and still can't figure things out.
But thanks anyway for the suggestion
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