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Published: 2011-05-04 06:19:15 +0000 UTC; Views: 157; Favourites: 5; Downloads: 0
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Description Locked up thoughts stay behind my mouth

Retaining the image others have of me

Who am I? Am I nice, am I mean...stupid?

It depends on who YOU are

My Actions are influenced by your presence

Altering from person to person

If I don't agree with what you have to say

You would never know

Fickle thoughts bouncing back and forth inside my mind

Unable to decide

By trying to please everyone I lose my identity

The one I never had

Constantly molding myself to meet others interests in order to be liked



I don't want to hurt anyone

But in the end ...I'm hurting me
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Comments: 6

UtauReni [2011-05-04 23:57:22 +0000 UTC]

i recognize this concept. i much prefer hanging out with you and maya and my band people because thats where i feel most comfortable, where im myself. i hope you feel the same way about me great poem happiest lauren

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Rose15r15 In reply to UtauReni [2011-05-05 02:29:19 +0000 UTC]

Yes, totally. Thank you so much!

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NajikaSun [2011-05-04 23:00:33 +0000 UTC]

This is really well done, Lydia!

From knowing you for about 5 years now, I'd say this sums up everything you've ever told me into 15 lines. Wonderful job!

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Rose15r15 In reply to NajikaSun [2011-05-04 23:16:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank You so much!

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McLuvin [2011-05-04 15:01:24 +0000 UTC]

There's a truth and a half. Everyone is a compilation of slightly stunted personalities used in a variety of pre-designated roles determined by a first impression. It's really hard to break out of them, and it's hard to say why we get into them in the first place. It probably makes life a lot harder when you realize someone you hate is actually a multi-faceted human being like you are when you're by yourself.

You should consider doing a full prose piece on this, maybe.

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Rose15r15 In reply to McLuvin [2011-05-04 22:40:36 +0000 UTC]

oh wow...Thanks so much! I'm flattered.

Like I said in my artist's comments, I'm not much of a poetry writer. If I have the time (or get really bored one day) I might pick it back up.

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