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Published: 2009-06-08 00:35:33 +0000 UTC; Views: 273; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 0
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The days blaze on,complete with sun.
It's as if the hot pearl
is unable to run.
Heat pierces slick skin
with no place to hide?
Scarce cool shapes
of shadows we ride.
The endless blue
with puffs up high
The sharp emerald blades
in meadows we lie.
The fresh sweet blossoms!
bright lemon and red,
The silky smooth florals
above our heads.
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Comments: 7
rawrr.
you are too good!!!
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i love all the metaphors you used!
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heyy! i didn't see you at summer school today!
did you have fun??
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(= your second stanza i found to be beautiful. the rhyme made me smile. its funny how things like form and rhyme can make such a huge difference. your third and fourth stanzas are so so pleasant. (= the imagery is beautiful. this is a very nice poem! i like it
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