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rosiecoleman — Night ranger

Published: 2014-01-21 00:40:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 1277; Favourites: 26; Downloads: 0
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Description Cleaned up version of a Spitpaint i did a few days ago. Tried to focus mainly on values and lighting.



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Comments: 4

fabiolairizarry [2014-01-21 00:48:22 +0000 UTC]

I think you should do something with the tree in the upper left corner. The sharpness is distracting and seems confusing which plane it is on. Maybe play with the composition.

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rosiecoleman In reply to fabiolairizarry [2014-01-21 04:02:53 +0000 UTC]

Yes i agree, it was kind of wigging me out while i was doing it but now i see it just looks a bit out of place. Tthanks for the feedback

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fabiolairizarry In reply to rosiecoleman [2014-01-21 06:17:09 +0000 UTC]

It happens to me a lot. You're welcome!

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fabiolairizarry [2014-01-21 00:47:09 +0000 UTC]

You really did change it quite a lot. Although, I don't know, I appreciate the foreground leaves in the past one. But this one is definetely sharper, with a better focal point and much more defined form-wise. Good work.

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