Phoenix-God-of-Fire [2017-01-07 15:14:50 +0000 UTC]
the body, clothes,and pose are all great, but the face is a bit.. off
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Phoenix-God-of-Fire In reply to Phoenix-God-of-Fire [2017-01-07 15:21:35 +0000 UTC]
OH! i see where it is now, It's her left eye! it's too much in the dead center of her face from this 45 degree shot. It also doesn't seem to be quite aligned, horizontally, with the other eye.
Try lowering the eye a few pixels, as well as bringing it just a tad closer to her nose. Slanting it counter-slockwise a few degrees would probably also help, and finally moving the iris a bit more towards the inside will probably fix the slightly cross-eyed look she currently has.
At least that's what it looks like to me and
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