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IHaveTheWrongGlass [2015-11-06 13:30:36 +0000 UTC]
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Let me start by just saying, what an amazing, visually stunning piece. It brings joy to my tired eyes.
Firstly, you limited palette was well chosen. You have succeed in combining the three "areas" of the piece through the linking of the brown-yellow tone and hue found throughout.
The skeleton looks anatomically correct (but do not trust me on this, I am no Med student), however the positioning of the longest skeleton foot looks a little awkward in regards to the position she is in. As she is reaching out towards the book, naturally (this is just my observation from everyday life) people's limbs tend to stretch out. Therefore, the leg may need to be a little more extended and the foot that is just below the surface should have a more acute angle towards the shin.
The wave that is created by the hair creates a nice path for the eyes to follow towards the feet. It is also beautifully shaded, so I commend you on a job well done.
(I don't know if this is just your style, but the ears seem to be a little bit lower than normal.)
The little blue flower within the book creates a lovely focus point which give the piece a certain meaning and evokes certain emotions. For me- longing, ambition and hard work with a hit of anguish.
The bubbles are stunning, I must say. They way there are spread throughout the work gives it a sense of cohesion. Great Job Mate!
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Mazzue [2015-10-31 00:31:16 +0000 UTC]
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The composition of this piece flows adequately with the transition from the dark masses to the lighter areas of the work. Especially with the fluid coloring and line work in the objects, expressing lots of movement such as the loose pages, her hair flowing in space, and particles plunging in the direction she's heading.
The pallet in this piece is vibrant. The luminous sections helps for attention-grabbing + compliments the vivid colors well. I really like the theme of this piece, as it got me to stay on this work.
The content's line work, colors, and details allowed me to absorb the idea and study the objects placed in critical areas. In example, the darker masses, where one's eyes would look to first. In this area, her skeleton and crows are placed. Very beneficial towards the theme. Another is the blue flower in contrast to the warmer and brighter palettes.
These objects build the central idea of the work and definitely fits the season. On the other hand, they gave me a sort of emotional feel as I read the description.
Her facial expression shows a struggling, worried look to grasp the flower. According to the description, it was to remember that she was once a "living, breathing person" and not to start forming tears or anything, but also to comfort the loved ones she has left behind. So it got me compensating, "What if she can't reach the flower? What would happen then? Would she still be sane?" etc. etc.
Without doubt, a very dynamic composition. Description and title influenced me as to think of this as a sad/depressing piece. In my opinion, the addition of other warm colors by hinting them on the girl should allow it to tie it all together so that the palette expands and doesn't just stay on one color that has many shades, instead has a variety of blends. Nonetheless, that could just be the art style but a FANTASTIC piece to fit the season (but now with brighter colors)! Thank you for sharing this beautiful yet dramatic creation.
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ABlipinTime [2019-03-04 18:42:40 +0000 UTC]
It's a fantastic, piece, but if you want critique, then one thing I'd ask for improvement on would be your ambient shading where your clothes and skin overlap. When objects get closer, less light falls between them, making them darker. You managed to get some of that shading, but it seems to uniform rather than gradually darker the farther "down the tunnel" you get. Maybe that's the effect you want?
Overall, though, awesome job!
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Serah-Valentine [2019-03-04 06:00:44 +0000 UTC]
This is so freaking gorgeous.
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DeadCobra [2019-03-03 19:40:24 +0000 UTC]
This is wonderful
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kuragii [2019-03-03 17:13:37 +0000 UTC]
Would really love to buy this as an A3 print from your shop;;; and also would be great if you brought back the manaka charm ;;;;///;;;;
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Janyan-styles98 [2019-03-03 13:48:56 +0000 UTC]
OK this art is so AMAZING and creative!
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Ryuzuki98 [2019-03-03 09:05:07 +0000 UTC]
This is amazingly done!!! Beautiful and sad...
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S3rb4n [2019-03-03 08:57:15 +0000 UTC]
What an amazing job!
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BluestarMudwing [2018-05-30 22:54:31 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool!
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yoursolemate [2016-10-11 18:41:26 +0000 UTC]
Are the pages representing the memories of her life?
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GoldenNocturna [2016-05-05 19:17:58 +0000 UTC]
This was an automatic fave. Like, I'm not even playing, man.
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Muraki3777 [2016-03-19 21:13:06 +0000 UTC]
cool!
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silentmatters [2016-03-19 06:16:24 +0000 UTC]
Awasome :3 oh my god love your draws
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Ururuty [2016-03-19 04:56:23 +0000 UTC]
very nice
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PJToon75 [2016-03-19 04:18:46 +0000 UTC]
This is beautiful work!
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Cyokina [2016-03-19 01:46:58 +0000 UTC]
this is awsome!!
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Fmubina [2016-03-19 00:31:02 +0000 UTC]
Freakn cool dude! I luv your artwork ^^
Feels like it has a deepful meaning
*Sorry for my bad english haha
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PikaGurl98 [2016-03-19 00:08:41 +0000 UTC]
I really love the idea/concept of this art of how she is living again after death
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salyssong [2016-03-18 22:16:48 +0000 UTC]
Yellow beauty burns gold.
Know the quote?
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SeselisCreates [2016-03-18 21:03:05 +0000 UTC]
Looking through the comments I've seen a few people offer what they feel this piece evokes- it got me wondering what you were thinking when you created it?
Of course I have my own idea, but I'd love to hear it from the horse's mouth (...which is kind of a weird idiom but I digress).
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mockingbirdontree [2016-03-18 20:39:29 +0000 UTC]
Touching scene of the girl trying not to be forgotten.
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TarmiSkye [2016-03-18 18:53:48 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!
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Wolfiehh [2016-03-18 18:36:14 +0000 UTC]
Woah!
I'm in loove @,@
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Lintu47 [2016-03-18 13:53:49 +0000 UTC]
Congrats on the DD!
Have a nice day!
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kikat7 [2016-03-18 12:36:08 +0000 UTC]
that's amazing and touching
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Saiivee [2016-03-18 09:48:57 +0000 UTC]
congrats on the DD! your art is so inspirational
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NineKouzuki [2016-03-03 02:47:21 +0000 UTC]
Incrible! Really, i loved <3
Particularly, i like your style and drawings. Beautiful work
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iiBlueAurora [2016-01-17 10:16:42 +0000 UTC]
Such pure majesticness. ;0;
I must let those three see it and acknowledge the true ability of a real artist..
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Thy-xin In reply to iiBlueAurora [2016-01-23 02:47:25 +0000 UTC]
haha thanks for letting my eyes set on a beautiful piece like this
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iiBlueAurora In reply to Thy-xin [2016-01-23 09:58:27 +0000 UTC]
its bae, i know, so 2 bae 4 me
;u;
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Iceilis [2016-01-02 16:12:06 +0000 UTC]
AAA this looks so cool OwO
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Rinapon [2015-12-24 11:33:34 +0000 UTC]
Loving the goldish color tone~~
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sweetkaylee18 [2015-12-19 08:52:26 +0000 UTC]
...this is so totally going to my favourited artworks
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FloralEye [2015-12-11 14:56:57 +0000 UTC]
❤️
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dolfinmageOwO [2015-11-24 15:04:44 +0000 UTC]
this is just so awesome that i dont know what to say but stare at this for 5 minutes straight...
thats not weird, rite?
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OcioProduction [2015-11-20 12:37:27 +0000 UTC]
ABSOLUTELY F A N T A S T I C!!!!! both concept and execution!
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Vorp [2015-11-19 01:06:04 +0000 UTC]
Sweet! ^.^
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AffectedMind [2015-11-18 14:25:38 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely beautiful! *-*
I love the shading and the water drops look like real <3
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LadyofSandstone [2015-11-15 19:11:40 +0000 UTC]
Your art style is fantastic and this piece is particularly lovely! Your colours are perfect and the anatomy is spot on <3
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