Comments: 19
LesCheveux [2008-03-27 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]
and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--
and thus I fell in love with this poem.
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xxJ0YL0VENiMExx [2008-03-22 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]
the imagery is so beautiful. congratulations on the dd.
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tinyplaidninja [2008-03-22 02:45:27 +0000 UTC]
amazing imagery!
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strawberryglitter [2008-03-21 23:12:52 +0000 UTC]
i never wanted it to end, every line took my breath away. the way you word things is so unusual and beautiful
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dorkalotum347 [2008-03-21 21:35:21 +0000 UTC]
that's great imagery, and a wonderful poem!
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Lyricalicious [2008-03-21 20:09:16 +0000 UTC]
oh my... yes loved every word of it... keep up the beautiful imagery... and that first line was lovely...
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YourButt [2008-03-21 19:54:15 +0000 UTC]
I love it! The first line really grips the reader!
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CharliePM [2008-03-21 18:49:05 +0000 UTC]
Incredibly wonderful, brilliant images. Well done.
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uno2tres14 [2008-03-21 18:20:33 +0000 UTC]
Stunning, truly fabulous.
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BonJerome [2008-03-21 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]
This is really cool. I especially like the third stanza. Beautiful words, all.
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seasiren717 [2008-03-21 16:41:46 +0000 UTC]
that is .......wow, i cant even descrice how this makes me feel......very articulate and wonderful use of imagery
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LittleLottexo [2008-03-21 14:15:55 +0000 UTC]
I adore this.
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qbeentraining [2008-03-21 13:26:53 +0000 UTC]
Beautiful poem, I can almost hear someone reading it outloud, but very softly.....
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hhryah [2008-03-21 11:45:49 +0000 UTC]
Absolutely stunning way of describing something that is often too cliched because of its familiarity.
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Angelkitteh [2008-03-21 07:29:08 +0000 UTC]
"Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven"
I love that. Gorgeous poem.
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