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Description Months grouped together like careless footsteps
stroll upon the lashings accorded to me by the sun.
In January I am caressed by ghosts
or something as cold and invisible.
They intrude upon hair, clothes; books
dampen with monstrous hand prints.
    Are these shells of half-dead creatures
    holding themselves, ancient in a cavern somewhere
    or tethered to the earth by thought?

Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven
picked off like a soft disease
nestle on my shoulder as if pulled from my sweater.
they emerge quietly like droplets of blood. Whisper:
          we are the teeth of ancient things.

White drift presses upon the house
and the window. Its cool breath scales
my chin, pries open my mouth like a tenacious lover,
and settles with a small sigh on the tongue
like a hiss of steam.
        We have made and unmade warmth.

Angry flakes brandish their sharp
edges in a dance of swords as they tumble,
and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--
The last dying things of winter.
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Comments: 19

LesCheveux [2008-03-27 22:40:50 +0000 UTC]

and the sigh on my tongue becomes a shriek
as they meet flesh and disappear--

and thus I fell in love with this poem.

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xxJ0YL0VENiMExx [2008-03-22 06:22:37 +0000 UTC]

the imagery is so beautiful. congratulations on the dd.

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tinyplaidninja [2008-03-22 02:45:27 +0000 UTC]

amazing imagery!

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strawberryglitter [2008-03-21 23:12:52 +0000 UTC]

i never wanted it to end, every line took my breath away. the way you word things is so unusual and beautiful

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dorkalotum347 [2008-03-21 21:35:21 +0000 UTC]

that's great imagery, and a wonderful poem!

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inwhitehouses [2008-03-21 20:35:56 +0000 UTC]

loved it.

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Lyricalicious [2008-03-21 20:09:16 +0000 UTC]

oh my... yes loved every word of it... keep up the beautiful imagery... and that first line was lovely...

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YourButt [2008-03-21 19:54:15 +0000 UTC]

I love it! The first line really grips the reader!

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CharliePM [2008-03-21 18:49:05 +0000 UTC]

Incredibly wonderful, brilliant images. Well done.

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uno2tres14 [2008-03-21 18:20:33 +0000 UTC]

Stunning, truly fabulous.

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Nurzy [2008-03-21 18:13:05 +0000 UTC]

one word:

awesomeness!!

great immagery....

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BonJerome [2008-03-21 18:01:37 +0000 UTC]

This is really cool. I especially like the third stanza. Beautiful words, all.

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seasiren717 [2008-03-21 16:41:46 +0000 UTC]

that is .......wow, i cant even descrice how this makes me feel......very articulate and wonderful use of imagery

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LittleLottexo [2008-03-21 14:15:55 +0000 UTC]

I adore this.

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qbeentraining [2008-03-21 13:26:53 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful poem, I can almost hear someone reading it outloud, but very softly.....

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hhryah [2008-03-21 11:45:49 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely stunning way of describing something that is often too cliched because of its familiarity.

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Dai-ba [2008-03-21 10:22:51 +0000 UTC]

this is great
^^ very nice i was captured by it inmediatly

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Angelkitteh [2008-03-21 07:29:08 +0000 UTC]

"Bits of cloud, the flesh of heaven"

I love that. Gorgeous poem.

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dragonaholic [2008-03-21 07:16:07 +0000 UTC]

Absolutely beautiful! =O

I love the imagery in the second and third stanzer the most. Lovely lovely lovely

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