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Finally moving on. Shino. Always the reasonable one that shares that reason through insect related analogies. >.>;;

Next up is Kurenai and Kiba.

EDIT: PEOPLE!!! I Quit updating this comic THREE YEARS AGO. Stop asking me to continue this comic. I have no desire to continue it. Thankyou for reading what is there.

EDIT: this doujinshi is on haitus until further notice. I'm sorry, but I just can't seem to continue. Quite frankly, my love for Naruto has died. If I ever get to catch up with the manga, I might continue, but this is all I have. Sorry guys. Thanks for reading.


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The Rest of the Story:
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Kiba and Kurenai fend off enemy shinobi, with Kiba having to use his giant dog jutsu. The other two arrive to help a bit, but the battle ends and they return home. On the way, Kiba smells blood, old blood. They happen upon a battlefield, where a few months ago it seems a caravan was travelling and was attacked. The decay around them shocks Kiba and Shino. It shocks Kiba because even though the battle took place months ago, the bodies and blood are still fresh, as if they had just been killed. Shino realizes a connection between this battlefield and Kitsune.

Kitsune learns a lot from the other students. In the final 2 weeks of her stay, she takes lessons from Kakashi when he's not away on missions, he having the excuse of being bored with no students around to teach. Since she's not really a shinobi (and because they can't risk the chance that she may be a spy), she is forced to leave Konoha when her wounds finally heal. Kakashi follows after her, seeing that she was followed by assassins (jeeze, it's been so long, i forget the name of those guys).... ANBU! that's it! lol. The students realize that she's gone, and chase after her after getting permission from the Kazekage. After reaching a far away village, using the speed skills she learned, she realizes that she was followed, and fends off the Anbu, but only long enough for Kakashi to arrive. She runs away before seeing that he knocked them out for her. Of the 4 Anbu chasing her, only 1 is left. The students arrive and find her, and together they fend the last Anbu off. They finally pin him down with Shikaru's shadow jutsu and show him the return summons from the Kazekage, and that Kitsune has been made into a citizen/shinobi. Kakashi appears, letting the kids know they did well, and that he would have stepped in if they needed him. They return to Konoha. They find that it was not the Kazekage that ordered the Anbu after Kitsune. She begins her own investigation on who ordered it.

She passes the first basic tests of being a ... gennin? >.> I don't remember the first shinobi rank. lol. With that done, she spends a few weeks enjoying being with her friends again, even participating in a few missions with them as an odd person out. Finally, she is recruited for a very difficult mission, S Class. Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma are sent on a retrieval mission. The target was something that would instantly be known to have gone missing, so they take Kitsune along, who has a photographic memory, to look and memorize the contents of a scroll. They sneak in and the mission is a success. However, when Kitsune transcribes the written contents and gives it to the Kazekage, she realizes there was also a secret code, a code that reveals information about a secret organization named Akatsuki. She recognizes the name and remembers the events that occurred during the attack on her caravan (the same one that Kiba had found a few months prior).

There was more that happened... like she participates in the Chuunin Exams alongside Sakura. During the final exam, the battles between the gennin, Neji uses his byakugan eyes and sees her true form. She has a body, yes, but her soul floats above her body, held down by massive chains, her body as it's anchor. Shocked from the sight of it causes him to cry out. Hinata decides to use her vision as well, and collapses from a mixture of horror and sadness. From the moment of Neji's hesitation at seeing her true nature, Kitsune catches him off guard and wins the battle. She becomes a Chuunin, and so does Sakura.

I can't remember a lot of it now. =/ Eventually, she's sent on a mission. On that mission she encounters the member of Akatsuki, Hidan, that murdered her family and the rest of the caravan. She gives her best fight, but she is bested by Hidan. As she lies on the ground, bleeding to death, he finally remembers her. He recalls the battle with her father, a Knight from Europe, and mocks her for not being her father's equal in battle, and the stupidity of coming after him when she hadn't surpassed her father. It's revealed that she was not really alive. Her soul is tied down to her body. Hidan tells her about the forbidden jutsu he had used on them all, but only she was compatible with the curse. She was a walking puppet for him. And now that she was dead, all her knowledge would revert to him... unexpectedly, dogs come from nowwhere and rush to attack Hidan. He jumps away, realizing that more shinobi are on the way. He decides to leave, saying it wasn't time to reveal himself, that the plans of the Akatsuki must be upheld, even if he doesn't like it.

That scene is where a lot of questions are answered. The curse on her is the reason behind why people can't sense her presence - she's a really a ghost possessing her own body at a distance because of the chains. This is why Shino's bugs are repelled by her; her chii flows unnaturally. The blood from the caravan massacre smells exactly like Kitsune's blood. They had all been cursed too, to never decay. The reason she has a photographic memory is because she was meant to be a spy for Hidan, to eventually give all the information she had gathered to him when she finally passed on, and he would extract it from her blood that seeped out of her.

Kakashi arrives in time to find her before she dies. Desperate to save her, to not lose another student, he tries and tries every healing jutsu on her, to no avail. No healing jutsus are compatible with her, due to the curse. She smiles though, knowing he was trying to save her. Desperate to make her final moments just a little longer, he uses his sharingan on her. Inside their minds, she speaks to him for the first time. She tells him that she was from Europe, but she was happy to have made so many friends. He begs her to not die. She pauses and then tells him there was a possibility. She will die when all the blood leaves her body. The blood carries the curse that had been keeping her from crossing over, and acts as the chain between her soul and body. If he could stop the blood from leaving her body, she won't pass on. She warns him though, that she had already died. She asks him, "Which is crueler? To let me die having not avenged my family? or to keep me from resting in peace?" Kakashi decides to save her. He exits the sharingan jutsu and burns all her wounds closed. The blood can no longer escape her body, but she is incapacitated. He takes her back to Konoha.

The story ends with her in her hospital bed again. Kakashi visits her. A daffodil sits by the window. Sakura comes in and they talk. Kakashi had told her about the curse. Sakura's theory is that although not all the blood had escaped, it had weakened the curse jutsu considerably. Kitsune would not wake up until the curse had time to infect all the new blood. They decide to wait for her until she wakes up.

Sooooo yeah. Jyanpu would end on a bittersweet note. The purpose of it was to answer a lot of unanswered questions, fill in plot holes a bit. There was a LOT that was supposed to happen. Another reason I quit was I was overwhelmed by the shear scope of the story I had to tell.

Hope that satisfy's your curiosity.

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Shino and Hinata (c) Masashi Kishimoto-sama
pwned Rogue nin (c) moi
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Comments: 199

RoxyRoo In reply to ??? [2015-03-08 17:35:34 +0000 UTC]

If you enjoyed Jyanpu, did you know i have original manga too? Check out my main gallery and you'll see them.

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samuraivalerie [2014-08-31 16:07:10 +0000 UTC]

Could you have at least put out written version of a hasty summery like that? and I know what it's like to feel uninterested in a series after a while. though me that usually just means I need a break to work on something else.

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sonic2049 [2014-05-26 15:43:01 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO its the end of the world noooooooo dont stop it got good and and Β  Β 

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RoxyRoo In reply to sonic2049 [2014-05-30 03:11:35 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it. Thankyou for reading!
If you like my storytelling, I have my own original mangas you can read too.

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sonic2049 In reply to RoxyRoo [2014-05-30 19:17:21 +0000 UTC]

plz can you thel me wher??

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RoxyRoo In reply to sonic2049 [2014-05-31 02:00:11 +0000 UTC]

Both my comics are on this website. I will be adding more to The Trespasser soon.

www.inkblazers.com/authors-and…

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hanazono2 [2014-02-05 11:07:12 +0000 UTC]

Why............................................................................

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RoxyRoo In reply to hanazono2 [2014-02-05 18:28:33 +0000 UTC]

Such a sad comment. I'm sorry.Β 

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Skitty-Ng [2012-12-20 04:11:54 +0000 UTC]

I know that you stopped updating on this, but is there some way I can know what happens next?

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NARRIMIZUKI [2012-08-19 14:34:22 +0000 UTC]

NNNNOOOOOOO I LOVED IT I WANT MORE

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RoxyRoo In reply to NARRIMIZUKI [2012-08-20 03:47:15 +0000 UTC]

If you like the storytelling in this one, try reading my original manga. It's called The Glass River, and it just got published this summer. :3

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NARRIMIZUKI In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-08-21 19:56:59 +0000 UTC]

thank you so much my friend

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RoxyRoo In reply to NARRIMIZUKI [2012-08-21 23:50:45 +0000 UTC]

^^ You're welcome.

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strawberry-girl-hero [2012-06-22 09:15:05 +0000 UTC]

although you stopped updating, i can't help but wonder what would have happened if you continued with this much talent. Im glad you actually told new readers that you stopped updating a long time ago so we won't be left wondering what happened.

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RoxyRoo In reply to strawberry-girl-hero [2012-12-20 07:14:13 +0000 UTC]

I updated the Artist's comments. Have fun reading the full summary of what was supposed to happen.

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RoxyRoo In reply to strawberry-girl-hero [2012-12-20 07:03:17 +0000 UTC]

Kiba and Kurenai fend off enemy shinobi, with Kiba having to use his giant dog jutsu. The other two arrive to help a bit, but the battle ends and they return home. On the way, Kiba smells blood, old blood. They happen upon a battlefield, where a few months ago it seems a caravan was travelling and was attacked. The decay around them shocks Kiba and Shino. It shocks Kiba because even though the battle took place months ago, the bodies and blood are still fresh, as if they had just been killed. Shino realizes a connection between this battlefield and Kitsune.

Kitsune learns a lot from the other students. In the final 2 weeks of her stay, she takes lessons from Kakashi when he's not away on missions, he having the excuse of being bored with no students around to teach. Since she's not really a shinobi (and because they can't risk the chance that she may be a spy), she is forced to leave Konoha when her wounds finally heal. Kakashi follows after her, seeing that she was followed by assassins (jeeze, it's been so long, i forget the name of those guys).... ANBU! that's it! lol. The students realize that she's gone, and chase after her after getting permission from the Kazekage. After reaching a far away village, using the speed skills she learned, she realizes that she was followed, and fends off the Anbu, but only long enough for Kakashi to arrive. She runs away before seeing that he knocked them out for her. Of the 4 Anbu chasing her, only 1 is left. The students arrive and find her, and together they fend the last Anbu off. They finally pin him down with Shikaru's shadow jutsu and show him the return summons from the Kazekage, and that Kitsune has been made into a citizen/shinobi. Kakashi appears, letting the kids know they did well, and that he would have stepped in if they needed him. They return to Konoha. They find that it was not the Kazekage that ordered the Anbu after Kitsune. She begins her own investigation on who ordered it.

She passes the first basic tests of being a ... gennin? >.> I don't remember the first shinobi rank. lol. With that done, she spends a few weeks enjoying being with her friends again, even participating in a few missions with them as an odd person out. Finally, she is recruited for a very difficult mission, S Class. Kakashi, Kurenai and Asuma are sent on a retrieval mission. The target was something that would instantly be known to have gone missing, so they take Kitsune along, who has a photographic memory, to look and memorize the contents of a scroll. They sneak in and the mission is a success. However, when Kitsune transcribes the written contents and gives it to the Kazekage, she realizes there was also a secret code, a code that reveals information about a secret organization named Akatsuki. She recognizes the name and remembers the events that occurred during the attack on her caravan (the same one that Kiba had found a few months prior).

There was more that happened... like she participates in the Chuunin Exams alongside Sakura. During the final exam, the battles between the gennin, Neji uses his byakugan eyes and sees her true form. She has a body, yes, but her soul floats above her body, held down by massive chains, her body as it's anchor. Shocked from the sight of it causes him to cry out. Hinata decides to use her vision as well, and collapses from a mixture of horror and sadness. From the moment of Neji's hesitation at seeing her true nature, Kitsune catches him off guard and wins the battle. She becomes a Chuunin, and so does Sakura.

I can't remember a lot of it now. =/ Eventually, she's sent on a mission. On that mission she encounters the member of Akatsuki, Hidan, that murdered her family and the rest of the caravan. She gives her best fight, but she is bested by Hidan. As she lies on the ground, bleeding to death, he finally remembers her. He recalls the battle with her father, a Knight from Europe, and mocks her for not being her father's equal in battle, and the stupidity of coming after him when she hadn't surpassed her father. It's revealed that she was not really alive. Her soul is tied down to her body. Hidan tells her about the forbidden jutsu he had used on them all, but only she was compatible with the curse. She was a walking puppet for him. And now that she was dead, all her knowledge would revert to him... unexpectedly, dogs come from nowwhere and rush to attack Hidan. He jumps away, realizing that more shinobi are on the way. He decides to leave, saying it wasn't time to reveal himself, that the plans of the Akatsuki must be upheld, even if he doesn't like it.

Kakashi arrives in time to find her before she dies. Desperate to save her, to not lose another student, he tries and tries every healing jutsu on her, to no avail. No healing jutsus are compatible with her, due to the curse. She smiles though, knowing he was trying to save her. Desperate to make her final moments just a little longer, he uses his sharingan on her. Inside their minds, she speaks to him for the first time. She tells him that she was from Europe, but she was happy to have made so many friends. He begs her to not die. She pauses and then tells him there was a possibility. She will die when all the blood leaves her body. The blood carries the curse that had been keeping her from crossing over, and acts as the chain between her soul and body. If he could stop the blood from leaving her body, she won't pass on. She warns him though, that she had already died. She asks him, "Which is crueler? To let me die having not avenged my family? or to keep me from resting in peace?" Kakashi decides to save her. He exits the sharingan jutsu and burns all her wounds closed. The blood can no longer escape her body, but she is incapacitated. He takes her back to Konoha.

The story ends with her in her hospital bed again. Kakashi visits her. A daffodil sits by the window. Sakura comes in and they talk. Kakashi had told her about the curse. Sakura's theory is that although not all the blood had escaped, it had weakened the curse jutsu considerably. Kitsune would not wake up until the curse had time to infect all the new blood. They decide to wait for her until she wakes up.

Sooooo yeah. Jyanpu would end on a bittersweet note. The purpose of it was to answer a lot of unanswered questions, fill in plot holes a bit. There was a LOT that was supposed to happen. Another reason I quit was I was overwhelmed by the shear scope of the story I had to tell.

Hope that satisfy's your curiosity. I'll post this in the artist's description so other people can read it too.

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RoxyRoo In reply to strawberry-girl-hero [2012-06-22 17:40:56 +0000 UTC]

I think I answered someone who asked about the rest of the plot. >.> It might be somewhere in the comments?

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strawberry-girl-hero In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-06-22 17:46:16 +0000 UTC]

oh, that's no what i meant. I meant how far you would go with this. not necessarily the plot XD

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95Jezzica [2012-04-16 20:20:44 +0000 UTC]

I found this doujinshi today, and this was totally awesome!
(Yes, I red all the 57 pages in 2 hours...) xD

When I found the first page I guess I became too curios about this one to not read,
even if you clearly stated in the beginning that you wouldn't continue this one.
I just have myself to blame that I now will wonder forever how this was meant to end. xD xD xD

But it was worth it, because such talent I've got to read/watch in this doujinshi you normally have to search a long time for.

It's a shame you lost your interest in Naruto/Naruto Shippuden and to continue this doujinshi
BUT
I respect your decision and can only pray that you one day will get your interest back.
You have great talent in drawing, I hope I will see more of you in the future.

///Jezzica

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-04-16 20:28:53 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, and read it so quickly! Jyanpu was definitely a learning experience for me. I had a lot of fun doing it.

If you like my stuff, I'm actually having my original manga published this fall. You can read the first few chapters here, if you like. It's called The Glass River.

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-04-18 15:33:51 +0000 UTC]

But... Is it really a good idea to publish the firsts chapters here if you're gonna sell it?

Doesn't that break against your contract or something? o.O

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-04-18 18:31:20 +0000 UTC]

It's publicity. And no, it doesn't break my contract. Besides, the cliffhanger will leave you wanting to buy it so you can read the rest. Also, there's plenty of webcomics that have been published and still sell well. You'd be surprised by the amount of people who prefer to own a printed copy. And anyways, most people read scanalations from japan. I'm beating the pirates to it.

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-04-21 19:10:21 +0000 UTC]

Will your manga be selling in Sweden?

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-04-21 19:23:25 +0000 UTC]

that's a good question. I'll ask my boss!

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-04-21 21:49:03 +0000 UTC]

That's great in that case- or else I won't be able to buy them.
I was born and I live in Sweden you see.

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-04-23 19:21:46 +0000 UTC]

They haven't replied to my email yet, but I looked at their FAQ. Apparently, P2 Manga publishes books made by people abroad, but I'm still not sure if that means they also sell to people abroad.

**** Scratch that. I looked at the Barns and Noble website. Even if you don't have that bookstore there, you can still order from them online. They will send it to you! You just have to punch in you international postal codes. Look here: [link]

Well that answers that. I guess you'll be able to get a copy after all! ^_^

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-05-02 18:13:28 +0000 UTC]

But I can't buy things through Internet.
I'm not 18 yet, so I need my parents permission- and I will never get that to buy a serie through Internet.

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-05-02 18:32:41 +0000 UTC]

>w> But oh there are loop holes, my dear.

Option #1: Tell your parents that you actually know the author (Me! lol). And you want to support my first published book ever. I will write you a note personally asking them to allow you to buy the book if need be.

Option #2: Ask a friend of yours to order it for you. This may be the easier option. haha If your parents ask where you got it, just say a friend got it for you or that you got it from a local bookstore. (the internet isn't technically local, but you don't have to tell them that).

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-05-02 18:39:45 +0000 UTC]

One problem:
We don't have a local serie-store and the book-store doesn't sell any series. xD

And mum and dad wouldn't allow me even if I told them I know you.
It's still through the internet...
Mah, they're a pain in the ass when it comes to things I want to buy through Internet!
Just because my brother was stupid enough to buy something for 5000 kr
(ca 500$ if you 'translate' it into USA's money) on Internet without Mum and Dad's permission.
___
Friends. hm... Let the operation start-the-begging-for-help begin!
In worst case I can tell them I got it in birthday present if I hurry up.

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RoxyRoo In reply to 95Jezzica [2012-05-02 20:25:03 +0000 UTC]

haha. Well, I wish you luck.

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95Jezzica In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-05-03 08:16:46 +0000 UTC]

Haha, thank you- I will probably need it. xD

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xAlalax [2012-03-31 17:00:41 +0000 UTC]

well at least u had a pretty good run i guess, too bad^^' it's over oh and you should totally watch the new naruto episodes/chapters when the war starts TOTALLY epic XD that will surely bring back ur naruto love

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RoxyRoo In reply to xAlalax [2012-03-31 18:42:52 +0000 UTC]

Heh. When and if I have time for it.

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xAlalax In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-03-31 18:44:46 +0000 UTC]

how old are you?

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RoxyRoo In reply to xAlalax [2012-03-31 19:27:46 +0000 UTC]

Old enough to have graduated from college and have a job. lol

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xAlalax In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-04-01 06:24:07 +0000 UTC]

XD i thaught you were still studying

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RoxyRoo In reply to xAlalax [2012-04-01 07:25:13 +0000 UTC]

Not anymore.

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lu40953 [2012-02-01 10:38:02 +0000 UTC]

Oh well. It was a really good manga!
You could seriously grow up to be a mangeka! XD

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RoxyRoo In reply to lu40953 [2012-02-01 17:44:09 +0000 UTC]

XD haha. I am, actually. I signed on with P2 Manga. "The Glass River" will be published this August. ^__^

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lu40953 In reply to RoxyRoo [2012-02-02 02:06:51 +0000 UTC]

woah, seriously! SWEEEEEEEET~~~!

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RoxyRoo In reply to lu40953 [2012-02-02 02:59:52 +0000 UTC]

^^ yes. seriously.

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Akippuden [2012-01-04 17:18:54 +0000 UTC]

nanda?-.- i guess we can't force you.

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heartbreakerninja [2011-08-23 22:21:33 +0000 UTC]

NOOOOOOO!!!!! *dies then comes back*

PLEASE PLEASE you got to finish it! its really good

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BiggestCupcake [2011-08-21 18:07:15 +0000 UTC]

If your love for naruto has died. What do you like right now. (just curious)

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RoxyRoo In reply to BiggestCupcake [2011-08-22 03:31:13 +0000 UTC]

I've been watching other animes. Mostly shorter ones, like Durarara, HGDK, and right now I'm watching Ao no Exorcist. As for drawing, I have an original manga going if you'd like to read it. It's called The Glass River. ^_^

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BiggestCupcake In reply to RoxyRoo [2011-08-22 03:36:20 +0000 UTC]

great, tnx
I want to go watch blue exorcist too n.n

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Mouseshadow16 [2011-06-11 22:14:03 +0000 UTC]

I have one question. Where in the world is Naruto? By the way AWESOME COMIC.

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RoxyRoo In reply to Mouseshadow16 [2011-06-11 23:03:03 +0000 UTC]

This takes place when Naruto is off traveling/training with Jiraiya, during the 3 year gap. It's it's a few weeks after he leaves.

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flyingslow13 [2011-05-13 17:26:43 +0000 UTC]

ahhhhhh dont stop your awsome at makeing comics

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RoxyRoo In reply to flyingslow13 [2011-05-13 17:39:45 +0000 UTC]

I have my own manga called "The Glass River". There are over 50 pages of it so far. ^^ I hope you'll like it as much as you did this one if you check it out.

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