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Rugthug — the boy who cried love

Published: 2008-04-21 23:58:25 +0000 UTC; Views: 2208; Favourites: 13; Downloads: 11
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Description So happy in love, oh yes he was,
But little did he know, what love does.
A lover indeed, and one so fair,
And now his heart's broken, without a stitch to spare.

An angel so beautiful, so perfect it seemed,
A girl unlike any other he'd ever dreamed.
But little did he know, that she would cheat,
And inflict his insides, until they would bleed.

Their love was so beautiful to him at first,
Protecting her from odds that were the worste.
Shielding her from fright, whatever the costs be,
All of it for her, he was in love you see.

And, in return, she would flash him her smile,
Making all of his troubles go away for a while.
And her laugh and voice, a chorus from heaven,
Always doing things for each other, never to be even.

She didn't arrive at dinner one day,
All of his plans, gone to waste.
Oh, but his friends saw the truth,
And they warned the boy what she would do.

He didn't listen, for he didn't see,
How everything was about to be.
Then he found out, the horrible truth,
Unfortunately, he saw the girl, all the way through.

And now he is tormented by sleepless nights,
"How could this happen?" is in his cries.
The poor boy didn't know what was about to come,
And now he is the boy, the boy who cried love.
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Comments: 26

Doves-Sing-Death [2008-04-27 19:55:46 +0000 UTC]

This is SUPER FANTASTIC!!!! It flows really well, and the rythm is really good! This is definately one of your bestest poems! It sounds really good read out loud too...^^

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Rugthug In reply to Doves-Sing-Death [2008-04-27 20:38:48 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks glad to hear u liked it

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Doves-Sing-Death In reply to Rugthug [2008-05-05 13:52:45 +0000 UTC]

it's cool!!!

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Rugthug In reply to Doves-Sing-Death [2008-05-05 20:12:54 +0000 UTC]

thanks much

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Doves-Sing-Death In reply to Rugthug [2008-05-16 18:36:35 +0000 UTC]

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Doves-Sing-Death In reply to Rugthug [2008-05-16 18:34:28 +0000 UTC]

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BlackCat1044 [2008-04-24 02:58:51 +0000 UTC]

wow I luv this!! *favs*

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Rugthug In reply to BlackCat1044 [2008-04-24 20:37:30 +0000 UTC]

thanks. and for the fav too ^_^

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BlackCat1044 In reply to Rugthug [2008-04-24 21:08:32 +0000 UTC]

Your Welcome!

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SolitaryChild [2008-04-22 15:47:47 +0000 UTC]

aww....Thats really sad....
But, I love it!

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Rugthug In reply to SolitaryChild [2008-04-22 20:41:35 +0000 UTC]

thanks lots

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SolitaryChild In reply to Rugthug [2008-04-23 00:40:03 +0000 UTC]

no problem.

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IsabellaMichel [2008-04-22 00:48:05 +0000 UTC]

Awww, this is so sad. But so good! Nice work!

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Rugthug In reply to IsabellaMichel [2008-04-22 00:48:40 +0000 UTC]

lol thanks!

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lyriclover627 [2008-04-22 00:03:10 +0000 UTC]

This is so beautiful! I really love it, you're a magnificent writer I must say! xD *fav fav fav* (:

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Rugthug In reply to lyriclover627 [2008-04-22 00:03:51 +0000 UTC]

wow this is like the first poem ever to be marked fav by so many! *bows* thank you, thank you

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lyriclover627 In reply to Rugthug [2008-04-22 00:10:05 +0000 UTC]

lol cause its so awesome xD (: *bows to your greatness* No, Thank YOU. (:

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Rugthug In reply to lyriclover627 [2008-04-22 00:22:32 +0000 UTC]

lol

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Asturas [2008-04-22 00:02:24 +0000 UTC]

Though you certainly express it far more eloquently, I feel your pain. Brother.

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Rugthug In reply to Asturas [2008-04-22 00:05:01 +0000 UTC]

oh...well...im a girl..heh...*blush* lol

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Asturas In reply to Rugthug [2008-04-22 03:27:07 +0000 UTC]

Ooh, well then it is I who should be blushing.

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Rugthug In reply to Asturas [2008-04-22 20:44:37 +0000 UTC]

^_^ lol

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supersalt22 [2008-04-22 00:02:00 +0000 UTC]

hm. very good

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Rugthug In reply to supersalt22 [2008-04-22 00:05:17 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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saddenedeyes [2008-04-22 00:01:16 +0000 UTC]

wow.
this is awesome.
keep writing!

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Rugthug In reply to saddenedeyes [2008-04-22 00:05:41 +0000 UTC]

i will dont worry!

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