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killjoykitty [2014-01-07 19:43:04 +0000 UTC]
JOSEY BBY<3
oh wow ruhi i love how your coloring style has changed! there's many little details to see~
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Ruhianna In reply to killjoykitty [2014-01-29 00:05:55 +0000 UTC]
kladjfklajf im glad you like it ;3; bwah you sweetie <3
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Stais [2014-01-07 18:37:30 +0000 UTC]
well seeing as no one else is commenting I believe I shall. I love Josey's face in this, her freckles and the coloring on her face I love how she's very earthy toned. From her clothing, hair, and even the blush on her face is an orange tint, not a red. It all makes her green eyes stand out so much more. The starry sky is super pretty. You must have worked really hard.
Though me being an oddball my favorite part is the grass in the first panel. It's so subtle but you can tell it's textured and have this grassy look to it.
For just random constructive critiquing.
shading the furry lining on her jacket differently then the rest of her might help really make the image pop. Little details like this really help.
lighting and shadows hit things differently so it looks off seeing that fluff shaded similarly to say her shirt or skin.
stais.deviantart.com/art/Prese⦠here's me using a simple furry shading. all I used was a brush and colored it no technique involved, just ran it across and it helped create the effect. Your style would benefit from simple little details but not over details like..trying to actually imitate a fur with shading and lighting it'd look way too odd. Anyway, I can't recall the brush name but I'll give it to you when I get home. ouo b
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Ruhianna In reply to Stais [2014-01-29 00:07:23 +0000 UTC]
eeeee- *loves this critique because shes actually GETTING ONE*
But i'll try and work on that next time ovo and i did a grass brush to get that grass e3e <3 thank you for noticing but yea I don't shade enough I really need to practice with that :I but you still need to give me that brush eDe 3
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pern2048 [2014-01-07 14:07:36 +0000 UTC]
so many beautiful stars 8γ
8Β Β
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Ruhianna In reply to pern2048 [2014-01-07 18:28:29 +0000 UTC]
bwah ;v; ~ thank you! Im glad you like the stars there my favorite part >v<
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