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Published: 2005-03-31 03:44:09 +0000 UTC; Views: 89; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 1
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Description He wants to write but his mind is undecided
Scrawling of ink by the flickering candle
His emotion releases a massacre
The victims run from the torch that burns
With the fuel of their treasonous lies that we let slip by
But how is there treason in a world without honor
The body is hungry so our minds are devoured
Eternally trapped in indecision
Bodies carrying stranger’s souls are dumped
In classrooms where the lies were taught
Never surpassing his disgust with others
From his own weakness he will never recover
The dying candle fades and replaced
Fluorescent bulbs and standardized tests
Awoken from the dream his words were weaving
Eternally bound by deadly decision
The gradual deterioration of his mental condition
Now the climax occurs in a terrible location
Takes his own life in a final choice
He leave the ghouls to the hollow voice
Ignorant authority, hostile to ingenuity
A void of bliss at a fairly cheap price
Sacrificing freedom to become a device
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Comments: 4

FreeSpiritEtrnalSoul [2006-01-05 01:06:57 +0000 UTC]

ok, wow, why did in hell did I just write, "good poem" so long ago....im such an ass. This is WAY more than just a good poem. Great imagry, i can see it all happening, and its soo true, this is todays reality...wow. im soo dumb. ok, well, whatever. SOrry for all teh dumb comments i left, im making them way better, because your poems have new meanings to me now....wow. i have changed...

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FreeSpiritEtrnalSoul [2005-11-25 18:01:01 +0000 UTC]

Very good poem

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Blytz [2005-04-02 16:06:11 +0000 UTC]

^ What that person said.

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RejectedSoul999K [2005-03-31 21:42:18 +0000 UTC]

i dont see why you dont like this one...the imagery in it is just amazing...anywho...i like all your writing lol ~K~

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