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RunTT — Perfect World Torture
Published: 2005-03-31 03:19:56 +0000 UTC; Views: 79; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 2
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Description In this Utopia my mind’s eye sees
Unbridled emotion, where they can’t interfere
Together we craft this place of perfection
Our visions are one in this decision

But this world we’ve created is doomed
To persist unrealized in our tortured minds
Unwise we try to seize this place
Between our hearts we catch a glimpse

This world we endure is a sepia print
The absence of life holds eyes transfixed
But we’ve seen full color
We’ll hold it forever
Saved and pained by our instant in time
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Comments: 3

FreeSpiritEtrnalSoul [2005-11-25 18:02:28 +0000 UTC]

very awesome poem

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Blytz [2005-04-02 16:04:45 +0000 UTC]

Very deep. very cool

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RejectedSoul999K [2005-03-31 21:45:23 +0000 UTC]

Wow!! not just because i like the poem..because...i reallly do...but it's so weird you would post that because i just wrote a paper like a half hour ago that had a very very similar...theme....well thats not the right word but it will have to suffice for now...lol anyways...love your writing...just a lil' creepy that it's like...about what i JUST wrote about lol...cool tho hehe ~K~

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