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Published: 2012-08-04 13:08:29 +0000 UTC; Views: 368; Favourites: 2; Downloads: 2
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„Oh, stop teasing me."Tengaar frowned at Hix who could just blink, irritated. „I am not teasing you."
Not at all convinced she looked back in the mirror, changed her posture and tilted her head. She kept frowning, while Hix smiled gently.
„Believe me," he said „you look great."
She pouted what just made her look cuter. Although it wasn't fitting for her anymore. Women in her state weren't supposed to be cute.
His own look focused on her clearly swollen belly which told anyone why she was so insecure at the moment.
„You will be a great mother, Tengaar."
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I like it too, Hix and Tengaar are my favorite characters , the only "issue" i saw with your grammar was "unsecure" for english it should be "insecure" other than that 100% correct as far as I can tell and even unsecure isn't that bad a mistake.
Seriously thanks for this little bit, it's nice to have some kind of continuation of their story after the games.
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Thank you very much. ^^
Irgh, insecure, of course!
This just happens too often. Thank you for pointing it out.
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I've never seen any fic that depicts Hix and Tengaar being this much older and married and she's pregnant ^^
Cute little snippet. By the way, is it German way to use quotation marks?
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Thank you. ^^
Yeah, I didn't either, so I wanted to write one for a change.
Yeah, we use the „" (though the second sign should be different, dA just can't show it) at least in non-commercial projects because we learn it like that in school. ^^
In commercial books we use different signs but they aren't on our keyboards so it's easier if we just use quotation marks.
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