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rydi1689 — Kyo's Wish Manga CH-2 Page 2 test

Published: 2013-01-16 22:54:31 +0000 UTC; Views: 972; Favourites: 18; Downloads: 0
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Description This is the second page of the second chapter of the manga I was working on for ~Ambers79 that we both eventually stopped working on.

I'm testing, testing I tell you ~ So ignore the fact that this page has already well over 3 years ...
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Comments: 12

BlackFoxAsakura [2013-01-17 15:33:01 +0000 UTC]

So fun! I love this! By the way, when will We chat a little? I was missing you and our chats much.

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rydi1689 In reply to BlackFoxAsakura [2013-01-17 21:06:07 +0000 UTC]

thank you dear How are you doing?

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BlackFoxAsakura In reply to rydi1689 [2013-01-18 16:05:52 +0000 UTC]

I'm fine... My job is still borring... But I'm glad We can to chat a little...

And You dear?

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rydi1689 In reply to BlackFoxAsakura [2013-01-18 18:29:21 +0000 UTC]

I'm having final exams this month and I'm also taking driving lessons to get my driver's license

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BlackFoxAsakura In reply to rydi1689 [2013-01-19 14:16:18 +0000 UTC]

I see... I wish You luck in both events, You really deserved to pass them both.

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rydi1689 In reply to BlackFoxAsakura [2013-01-20 12:01:18 +0000 UTC]

thank you sweetie! I wish you good luck with your job too <3

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BlackFoxAsakura In reply to rydi1689 [2013-01-21 16:50:10 +0000 UTC]

Thank You so much dear! I'm sure this year will be great for me!

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Deus-Nocte [2013-01-17 03:27:31 +0000 UTC]

(I know this page is old, but I wanted to point out some things I noticed in case you'd benefit from it XD Ignore me if you already knew all this)

Well... honestly, this page is really confusing to me. Though you didn't specify what direction to read it in, I assumed right to left because of the establishing shot. That first panel, however, seems completely random. Like... it shows people walking on the street, but by next panel the surroundings shift to being inside. You may just be showing the specific building he's in, but the focus isn't on the structure and there doesn't appear to be anything special about it.

And like... the light haired one's position shifted really suddenly. He looks like he's standing in one panel, but clearly sitting in another... |D;; Otherwise it's an okay layout~

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rydi1689 In reply to Deus-Nocte [2013-01-21 22:24:49 +0000 UTC]

I agree with all you said! I tried to make it more dynamic but it ended up so dynamic that the panels don't make sense when you try to find the order . However, in the last chapter we can see he falls asleep in the couch, and this is the second page of the second chapter, I didn't submit the first one but it showed a cityscape in the morning, that explains the people and then - again - him waking up in his couch.

I have no excuse for the sitting/standing guy , it just looked better that way . That being said, this comic is more than 2 years old, so old page is old, just submitted it to try the new submission page.

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DestinieKirby [2013-01-16 23:17:14 +0000 UTC]

So, what are you testing? Love the toning you did here, btw. It looks quite nice.

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rydi1689 In reply to DestinieKirby [2013-01-16 23:18:56 +0000 UTC]

haha I'm testing the new submit page, nothing out of the ordinary .

Thank you hon! <3

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DestinieKirby In reply to rydi1689 [2013-01-16 23:22:05 +0000 UTC]

I see. Well, you're welcome then.

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