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Rythmear — 3 Days: Final Night
Published: 2010-09-30 15:05:03 +0000 UTC; Views: 2388; Favourites: 17; Downloads: 19
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I cried...I cried for so long... and not even his shadowy embrace could lift me from my despair.
Jeremy hadn't loved me - he had been horrified at the mere sight of me... and when I asked him to stay, he ran from me...
He was right. He was always right... Jeremy didn't really care about me the way I cared about him - he was a liar, a deceiver, a manipulator...
And He wouldn't allow Jeremy to get away with it.
We waited for night to fall, and we crept into his house - using the spare key he always hid behind the pot-plants on the lawn.
I slinked around the back, while He went in through the front - knocking on the inside of the door to get his attention.
Jeremy came out, his face pale as he approached the hall-way, only to freeze at the mere sight of Him...
He looked so magnificent, his divine presence filling the room the closer he came... And Jeremy, no doubt plagued by fear and guilt, turned to run again - but not a second time.
His feet skidded to a halt mere inches from me as I stepped from the shadows, twirling the cheap present he had given me between my fingers.
His jaw dropped and he froze on the spot, giving me just the opening I needed to plant my little hand on his chest...
... and throw him to the ground with one push.
It was true - I Was the strong one - just like He'd said... and Jeremy, that cruel... lying man, he was the weak one...
As he lay dazed on the floor, we approached him, my heart pounding inside my chest.
He asked me what I wanted...
I stopped - and looked at Him...
He nodded, and faded back into the shadows...
I knelt down, pinning Jeremy's arms by his sides as I sat on his belly, one hand stroking his cheek.
"Oh Jeremy..." I said to him...
"You broke my heart..."
With one practiced flick, I extracted the blade from his Present, and held it tight in my hand...
"So I'm going to break yours..."
(Final part of my four entries to the Slender Man 3 days contest)
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Comments: 28
i was kinda hoping that, rather than her killing him, slendy'd do to hm whatever he did to her.
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Fun fact - I rarely ever see Slender Man actually do any of his own work.
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Oh my gosh this an is an amazing series! The images and the tale that go with them are all so thought provoking and intriguing. I love your interpretation of the slender man. I always still think of him as the hat man which was how he was in the stories I read but I like this interpretation better. I love the characters and how she joins the slender man! I would join him. He's excellent...
This is just too cool for school! <3!!!
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Its always nice to receive a positive word now and then ^.^
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You are quite welcome good sir. It is well deserved indeed!
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I'm horrible for not commenting on this series of shots before XD But you know it's friggin' amazing. The guy you got for Slender Man is seriously creepy! Love it
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Ahh yes, dear Ken... he's an epic model. I'll see if I can find you a picture of him Before his slenderisation (he already looks a Helluva lot like him, just a tiny bit hairier)
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Let me load it up to photobucket...
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i am going to hide now. slender umbrella is terrifying
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A subtle reference there, I'm glad someone got it
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hardly subtle. unless someone hasnt read your slender umbrella story yet
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You've woven a delightfully creepy tale here, wonderful combination of prose and images.
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Why thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed
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Nope, not going to look after I realized what I have just said.
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Still ain't looking, already know for it is number five for great villain songs by monsieur Nostalgia Critic. You should have a look.
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He does tend to get a good twisted playtime...
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FFFFFF, you do such a good job at blending imagery and words to create a huge story that's not... comicky.
I like how you don't put the words and the images together. It makes it more disjointed and creates a feeling of "What happened next what happened next?" You find yourself bouncing around to both the words and the images, trying to piece together when each picture took place in the story.
However, I find there's a slight discrepancy in this version. I really liked the previous one, where Jeremy has his interview, a lot better. I feel that in this one, the description of what is happening kind of destroys it a bit for me. Using the pictures to find out how people are moving was a lot more powerful, to me at least.
REGARDLESS Sexy work! Keep it up! <3
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Thank you kindly
And I actually swapped back and forth through all the comics, it went Interview, Girl, Interview, Girl - she had the last word.
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aha! I see now.
Regardless, I enjoyed the feel of just "Talking" more than I did with description. Well done overall! <3
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