Comments: 26
cornaii [2014-01-20 13:16:03 +0000 UTC]
Overall
Vision
Originality
Technique
Impact
This is really cute! aha. ^^
Vision.
The characters go really well together, and the colours.
However, the BG is quite.. Off putting? I can't quite tell if its the night sky or bubbles. This is because of the larger stars. ^^" If its a night sky, I think a few more smaller stars would of helped.
But I can see where you're coming from with the glare. : )
Also, the two characters staring into each other's eyes is beautiful. ^^
Originality.
While I was nit picking at the larger stars just before, they do give it a sense of originality. I also love how its dark at the middle, rather than fading half way like most people do.
The characters clothing too amg. x'3
Technique.
How you drew and coloured are simply beautifule.deviantart.net/emoticons/h/h… " width="15" height="13" alt="" data-embed-type="emoticon" data-embed-id="357" title="Heart"/> The textures you used suit it perfectly well. ^^
Impact.
Well, simply stunning.
This popped out the most out of all the deviations in my inbox simple because of the poses, colours, etc. And most of all the feeling you get from it.
So overall, a few more stars. Actually, this is perfect. x3 Well done!
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Ryu-Renz In reply to cornaii [2014-01-20 13:22:52 +0000 UTC]
Thank you~! ;;w;; You're critique helps me in the background and stuff nwn ( I was kinda rushing on it since I heard the fire alarm, and I merged the backround with the lineart, so I couldn't change it ;;w;;
Anyways, thank you so much!
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cornaii In reply to Ryu-Renz [2014-01-20 13:33:39 +0000 UTC]
Aha, yes. x3 Backgrounds personally take me a lot of effort to get right.
For a rushed bg, you did pretty well. ^^
My pleasure. c:
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Cammy-Senpai [2014-02-10 09:52:38 +0000 UTC]
OTP
OTP
OTP
>3
But really,it's AMAZING!
I like the shadings,AND THEM EFFECT > v <
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Ryu-Renz In reply to Cammy-Senpai [2014-02-10 13:29:31 +0000 UTC]
h-hey- >////<
what does otp mean?
and t-thank you ;v; <3
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Cammy-Senpai In reply to Ryu-Renz [2014-02-10 15:25:16 +0000 UTC]
OTP is One True Pairing c:
And no problemo cx
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rlyu00 [2014-01-26 04:44:05 +0000 UTC]
ahmigash, it's so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!! >U<
*dies*
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Kira-Nyan [2014-01-25 14:32:32 +0000 UTC]
Awww~
This is simply adorable
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xxLovelyRibbonxx In reply to Ryu-Renz [2014-01-22 20:52:31 +0000 UTC]
I'll try and give it to you on the last day of exam...
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xxLovelyRibbonxx [2014-01-22 19:29:22 +0000 UTC]
The dress.... Cute >//w//<
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Aktinik [2014-01-21 23:11:50 +0000 UTC]
KYAAAA!!!! IT'S SO CUTE!!!! (btw about the art trade, is it alright If I put u in a story instead of art? :3)
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Bjornthesurvivor [2014-01-20 16:45:20 +0000 UTC]
The perfect match! The perfect drawing! The perfect from the perfect drawster!
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klonoa-and-sonic [2014-01-20 16:39:11 +0000 UTC]
what a cute drawing from you and lionel-raion KAWAII
btw nice drawing and beautifull
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SassTheFamilyKid [2014-01-20 15:25:17 +0000 UTC]
Omg
You guys are so cute omf
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Alquimis [2014-01-20 14:55:24 +0000 UTC]
Daww so cuteh!!!!Kawaii!!!>w<
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DirkaLc [2014-01-20 13:15:08 +0000 UTC]
dat looks so kawaii x3
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Ryu-Renz In reply to DirkaLc [2014-01-20 13:23:47 +0000 UTC]
Wanna play grandchase again? owo- *slapped* Okay nevermind, I think Im bothering ya ;;w;;
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DirkaLc In reply to Ryu-Renz [2014-01-20 14:06:15 +0000 UTC]
i got a bad grade so i can't atm QAQ i wish i could play. If i could i'd play on fridays or saturdays. but on fridays i play leauge of legends with my friends (gaming night) and on saturdays as well
still i could try sometime
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mythala [2014-01-20 13:06:00 +0000 UTC]
Oh. My gosh.
THIS IS SO FREAKIN CUTE AHHHH
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Ryu-Renz In reply to mythala [2014-01-20 13:07:08 +0000 UTC]
//goes hide in a corner. blushing
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