Comments: 49
kshani [2012-02-20 06:08:00 +0000 UTC]
its reall cool and the guy is cute!!!
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ryujin-0 In reply to failyor [2008-09-30 06:59:42 +0000 UTC]
TQTQ~!XDD
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iruka92 [2008-08-27 15:48:00 +0000 UTC]
Uwaa... hot gle that dude.
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ryujin-0 In reply to iruka92 [2008-09-30 06:57:56 +0000 UTC]
hohoho weee~ glad ya think he is~ XD
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ryujin-0 In reply to Natsumi-Chian [2008-09-29 04:30:47 +0000 UTC]
self-made textures XD
every pattern/ texture in this work is self-made
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ryujin-0 In reply to Natsumi-Chian [2008-10-17 08:44:27 +0000 UTC]
can online also the school de comp bo msn T___T
(even if got i also no time T______T)
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hikaru55 [2008-08-21 01:39:59 +0000 UTC]
gorgeous XD
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ryujin-0 In reply to hikaru55 [2008-08-21 07:03:59 +0000 UTC]
many thanks~!XD
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hikaru55 In reply to ryujin-0 [2008-08-27 10:47:00 +0000 UTC]
ur welkam XD
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HueyYin [2008-08-04 02:19:54 +0000 UTC]
ill drool at him instead of playing chess with him ._. nice piece ^^
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ryujin-0 In reply to HueyYin [2008-08-04 10:59:42 +0000 UTC]
hahaha thanks!
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ryujin-0 In reply to RickyDemon [2008-08-04 11:00:59 +0000 UTC]
thiaaaaennnkk qiyouuuuu
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RickyDemon In reply to ryujin-0 [2008-08-04 13:21:26 +0000 UTC]
wielllkiomeeeeehhhh :33 XDD
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ringo-juice [2008-08-01 09:51:06 +0000 UTC]
omg this is really awesome!! n u only used a mouse to colour it? ahh i can't believe it.. lol i like his eyes .. n his clothes.. n hair .. n omg everything lahhh!!
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pseudolirium [2008-07-31 07:32:09 +0000 UTC]
I couldn't think of a better them for "Are you challenging me?" It's pretty much a perfect representation of the theme.
I especially love that the audience is actually the "you" in this piece- great interaction!
I love his cocky expression- it seems so confidence and perfect for this situation. Also, I'm in love with the way you shaded his hair- it's simple but the effect is really nice, you placed the strands in great positions.
Of course, I also like the skin tones you chose, soft and smooth. The way you painted the fur (and with a mouse, no less!) gives it good volume with plenty of texture.
As far as critique goes, I'm thinking that the perspective is a just a tad off. The chess pieces in the front, primarily the black pawn and white king, seem to not follow the same line of perspective as other pieces.
The guy's hand is also a bit awkward- I think that for composition purposes, you should have taken out the piece that blocks his hand so that we can get a good view of his whole arm movement. It adds more to the challenge theme because it's his move, and you don't know what he's planning (so it would match his expression). Furthermore, hands are extremely expressive so adding more body language to the piece will only boost the mood.
The background is a bit distracting and also feels out of perspective. I'm not sure if the flowery thing behind the guy is a chair or a fancy wallpaper- so it's important to differentiate that. More shading and more color variations in saturation would help. For example, if you make the background and other areas of non-interest muted, grayish colors, then the saturated parts will be the area of focus. As of now everything is demanding equal attention.
Lastly, as a suggestion to the whole "focal point", maybe blurring out the front pieces would be good. I see that effect a lot and it works wells, so that with the muted colors combo will successfully pull things into better perspective.
All in all, fabulous piece, I do love it. <3
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hachidaime [2008-07-30 15:47:12 +0000 UTC]
hoho nice one
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ryujin-0 In reply to hachidaime [2008-08-04 11:02:54 +0000 UTC]
thankie thankie~XD
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cottonwings [2008-07-30 12:30:24 +0000 UTC]
Even the chair's pattern... you made that too?? The flower motif? O_O
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ryujin-0 In reply to cottonwings [2008-08-04 11:03:38 +0000 UTC]
yup yup
actually i only drew a few and then rotate resize etc XD
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ryujin-0 In reply to KaelNgu [2008-07-30 07:40:16 +0000 UTC]
thanks for the comment!
colours too soft O___O??
but i do agree that the colours could be better
i actually did plan to have a reddish ligthing on them but it kinda spoils how i want the picture to have more focus on the red and yellow while the rest more black and white
haha i also agree with the arrangement of the chess...especially the one blocking the hand (kacau me edit the handXD)...but the chess so damn hard to draw symmetrical so i lazy to change liao hahaha
will keep in mind bout the depth XD
(but somehow i'm still sorta reluctant to darken some parts up for the depth coz it makes it lose its details wakakakaaa)
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Karumen-Chan [2008-07-29 17:17:57 +0000 UTC]
lol long time no see! how's everything and studies?
haha..great piece of artwork! *checkmate!*
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ryujin-0 In reply to Karumen-Chan [2008-07-30 06:50:42 +0000 UTC]
XD thanks~!
i'll be off to KL to study soon~
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Karumen-Chan In reply to ryujin-0 [2008-07-30 17:05:28 +0000 UTC]
oh..cool! study game design course? is it in TOA?
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ryujin-0 In reply to Karumen-Chan [2008-08-04 10:57:16 +0000 UTC]
nay they dont have game art...>___< wuuu
taking digital animation
yup TOA
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ryujin-0 In reply to Karumen-Chan [2008-08-06 08:59:21 +0000 UTC]
nyahaha thankies!!
(in their voucher it said digital animation can work in game industries too yeoshaaa!!WAKAKAAa)
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ryujin-0 In reply to ryujin-0 [2008-08-11 08:14:50 +0000 UTC]
*brochures
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rairy [2008-07-29 14:04:35 +0000 UTC]
whoaaa~~~ Wonderful!! I like the expression and that chair design! but why his eyes so white?
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ryujin-0 In reply to rairy [2008-07-30 06:52:48 +0000 UTC]
thanks a lot~!
umm...coz he got white eyes? lol *slayed*
(i think that it suits him better~)
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rairy In reply to ryujin-0 [2008-07-31 06:42:40 +0000 UTC]
Kufufufufuf~
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ryujin-0 In reply to nanaya-chan [2008-07-30 06:54:12 +0000 UTC]
uwaa~thanks~!XDD
kufufu~ i'm glad you find his eyes attractive~
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ArtimasStudio [2008-07-29 12:40:52 +0000 UTC]
wow, this looks great!
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