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Ryzoluca In reply to GoldenCharmander888 [2015-02-13 21:29:27 +0000 UTC]
I was brutally murdered while I slept my having an enemy slice my head off.
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confusedkangaroo [2015-02-12 19:38:20 +0000 UTC]
Aww, I like that poem, with the changes and how it begins with a bit of thought on what and how to write.
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Ryzoluca In reply to confusedkangaroo [2015-02-12 19:46:11 +0000 UTC]
Well, I get his a lot, and since I've been busy lately, I did something quick about it.
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Cheeyev [2015-02-12 13:58:15 +0000 UTC]
Nice story. I like it, and just try your best. I can help if you want.
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Ryzoluca In reply to Cheeyev [2015-02-12 14:33:07 +0000 UTC]
This is just a quick write. I need detail practice and emotion stuff. And poetry is a quick way to get my thoughts out instead of writing my usual long stories.
I appreciate your offer, but I must decline. I think I'm doing well.
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Cheeyev In reply to Ryzoluca [2015-02-12 14:35:44 +0000 UTC]
But I want to help you..
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Ryzoluca In reply to Cheeyev [2015-02-12 14:48:06 +0000 UTC]
How come...?
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Ryzoluca In reply to Cheeyev [2015-02-12 15:43:47 +0000 UTC]
You can always ask for one.
And my writing is just fine.
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Cheeyev In reply to Ryzoluca [2015-02-12 15:45:58 +0000 UTC]
I hope so, I don't want to be greedy..
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Ryzoluca In reply to Cheeyev [2015-02-12 17:06:22 +0000 UTC]
I just have a lot to do, so I'm writing quick things to entertain you.
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Cheeyev In reply to Ryzoluca [2015-02-12 17:28:22 +0000 UTC]
Uh, thanks
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Ryzoluca In reply to Cheeyev [2015-02-12 17:39:39 +0000 UTC]
No problem.
Why do you think I need help anyways?
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