Comments: 7
confusedkangaroo [2019-01-19 11:52:18 +0000 UTC]
It's been a while since I've read a PHC story... have I missed any or do I really not have that much time? Anyway, this was a fun read and a trip down memory lane for myself.
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Ryzoluca In reply to confusedkangaroo [2019-01-20 01:59:37 +0000 UTC]
It's been a while, I don't think you've missed any.
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Somebodywhodoes [2019-01-19 04:07:12 +0000 UTC]
First, thank you, Second, it was not what I expected, but I sorta liked it more than what I expected. I don't know, I just like it.
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Somebodywhodoes In reply to Ryzoluca [2019-01-22 01:02:56 +0000 UTC]
the only real problem I have with the story is something I don't really blame you on getting it wrong (I don't think that's proper grammar). Jake is not supposed to remember what happened the day he got bit, I didn't really make that clear, but he doesn't remember getting bit by an eevee, also, why he turned into an eevee after he got bit... doesn't actually have an explanation, so...magic I guess, its Pokémon, what do you expect.
my only other problem is that I haven't read your newest stories, so I didn't really understand why anything was happening, but that's my fault so its not really a problem.
overall, great story, thank you so much
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