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Published: 2010-03-11 17:20:07 +0000 UTC; Views: 606; Favourites: 28; Downloads: 3
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Description I may stumble
but I will not fall
I may bow my head
but I will also stand tall
I may not smile
that doesn't mean that I am low
I may not be strong
but I will never be weak
I may not believe
but I will not lose faith
I may not know why
but I will strive for what I believe is right
I may not forget
but I will forgive
I may not win
but I will not accept defeatΒ Β 
the longest tunnel this may seem
but I know the brightest light in the end I will see
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Comments: 21

Paddyeahh [2010-07-31 02:22:02 +0000 UTC]

Very good! Easy to relate to as well.

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s--o In reply to Paddyeahh [2010-11-29 05:43:59 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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xxsatinangelxx [2010-07-27 19:58:08 +0000 UTC]

i love this... i love the way its short yet says so much... x

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s--o In reply to xxsatinangelxx [2010-07-28 04:23:11 +0000 UTC]

i love it because after i finished writing it, i felt stronger and havent been really low since.

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xxsatinangelxx In reply to s--o [2010-07-28 11:05:06 +0000 UTC]

yeah I feel the same after I written a good piece of work x

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Drown-In-Empathy [2010-07-27 18:37:33 +0000 UTC]

Very good

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s--o In reply to Drown-In-Empathy [2010-07-28 04:16:17 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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abi-normal123 [2010-07-26 02:38:42 +0000 UTC]

this is really well written, strongly worded, and easy to relate to.

i love it.

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s--o In reply to abi-normal123 [2010-07-26 05:20:18 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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abi-normal123 In reply to s--o [2010-07-26 13:14:28 +0000 UTC]

you are welcome.

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ravenwritingclaw [2010-07-26 02:04:49 +0000 UTC]

This gives me encouragement and hope because I think I'm like the person narrating this. Great Job

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s--o In reply to ravenwritingclaw [2010-07-26 05:20:00 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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hallv5 [2010-07-25 15:26:14 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful... A mantra to follow as in the days of old...

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s--o In reply to hallv5 [2010-07-25 16:12:33 +0000 UTC]

I'm glad u find it beautiful

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meaningful-nonsense [2010-07-25 15:17:54 +0000 UTC]

I love it!

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s--o In reply to meaningful-nonsense [2010-07-25 16:10:32 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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meaningful-nonsense In reply to s--o [2010-07-26 03:09:08 +0000 UTC]

You're welcome

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Rojasova [2010-04-22 12:20:57 +0000 UTC]

Beside that I agree with #=ladyjinx13, I also think that this poem gives out a very strong and brave personality, and it's something many people would like to have but they just can't or are afraid to try to have. That's why I think it's a very good poem.

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s--o In reply to Rojasova [2010-04-23 14:13:33 +0000 UTC]

thank u...

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ladyjinx13 [2010-04-22 11:48:04 +0000 UTC]

I really like this, it says a lot

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s--o In reply to ladyjinx13 [2010-04-23 14:14:08 +0000 UTC]

thank u

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