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Published: 2004-05-18 23:07:40 +0000 UTC; Views: 770; Favourites: 19; Downloads: 155
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Description Just killing time.
1:00 am I'm tired but not sleepy.

stock - ~rose-stock

Purity

the clock keeps ticking
into nothing, silence.
A sound soon to end
erased, as anything.
love becomes loved
Own becomes owned
living turned dying.
The grass is greener
on the other side
but it’s never green
as it was the other
day.
Change...that’s what
they call it, right?
Fear is what it gives
to me.
All the things lost
along the road,
a long road i have
to walk, like anyone
else, no questions to
be asked.
after all, answers
never come this way.
And i miss the days
i loved the world,
the days i believed
in me...
I miss...
I miss my arms
wide open, ready to
embrace the miracles
they promised.
The miracle that
never came.
And the clock keeps
ticking, into nothing,
And i wait, for it to
come.
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Comments: 50

PannaZuzanna [2006-02-13 18:06:36 +0000 UTC]

Beautiful, just beutiful.. ^^

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miSSareY [2004-12-07 11:18:44 +0000 UTC]

omgosh.... you write songs?
this is beautiful!

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miSSareY In reply to miSSareY [2004-12-07 12:15:59 +0000 UTC]

amazing..... and the picture too
lol i kinda by passed that when i was reading the great lyrics.

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s-yl In reply to miSSareY [2004-12-07 11:19:21 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ladida [2004-10-27 17:54:23 +0000 UTC]

so bright and pure image
pure as a white soul
yet in words hides a little thorn of pain
and then again the lament becomes a wish

beautiful

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s-yl In reply to ladida [2004-10-27 17:57:12 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for such a sweet comment

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JoLiTa [2004-09-06 14:55:36 +0000 UTC]

great work!

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s-yl In reply to JoLiTa [2004-09-06 17:37:23 +0000 UTC]

thanks dear

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JoLiTa In reply to s-yl [2004-09-14 14:42:27 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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lil-souma [2004-09-03 01:54:45 +0000 UTC]

Lovely...

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s-yl In reply to lil-souma [2004-09-03 13:47:02 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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danielcraggs [2004-05-28 20:29:45 +0000 UTC]

Mmmmmmm That would look SUPERB as a CD cover, it really would Now you just gotta make a CD called purity

Keep up the great work, and thanks for your recent comments

Dan

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s-yl In reply to danielcraggs [2004-05-28 20:37:50 +0000 UTC]

That would not be a bad idea, i'd might actually try to do that. Thanks for taking a look at it

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darkleo [2004-05-25 02:29:17 +0000 UTC]

wow great poem great work ur gettin better everytime



Leo

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s-yl In reply to darkleo [2004-05-25 06:57:19 +0000 UTC]

thanks

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L0veIsSuicide [2004-05-24 12:26:27 +0000 UTC]

Loved it! The text is beautiful, and it came out quite nice!

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s-yl In reply to L0veIsSuicide [2004-05-24 12:38:43 +0000 UTC]

thankies Glad you liked it

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rose-stock [2004-05-23 02:18:25 +0000 UTC]

Very lovely, I love the words and how they go with the picture.

Thanks for using my stock!

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s-yl In reply to rose-stock [2004-05-23 13:46:37 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, especially for that pretty stock of yours

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Tinebra [2004-05-21 08:04:38 +0000 UTC]

^__^ bella bella bella bella ... ^___^

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s-yl In reply to Tinebra [2004-05-21 08:30:34 +0000 UTC]

Grassie

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Jomina [2004-05-20 07:10:58 +0000 UTC]

oh my god this is so beautiful!!!!!!

Oh god i love this s-yl!!

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s-yl In reply to Jomina [2004-05-20 07:13:49 +0000 UTC]

Thanks my friend, i'm really glad you like it

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CelticBeauty [2004-05-19 21:11:28 +0000 UTC]

Very clean and pretty...and well pure as you say Great contrast

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child-stainless [2004-05-19 09:54:13 +0000 UTC]

this... is excellent!
the words are fantastic, but when they're combined with the picture it make pure magic!
The use of sillhouette is excellent, and i love the use of space, the way its not all crammed together and it isn't busy... which makes the words more meaningful. the layers are great, it has wonderful depth.
love it, seriously... its a

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s-yl In reply to child-stainless [2004-05-19 10:08:55 +0000 UTC]

Thank you for everything, glad you enjoyed it

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kirjava [2004-05-19 09:38:41 +0000 UTC]

Hai aggiunto un texturizer?
Bella composizione!

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s-yl In reply to kirjava [2004-05-19 09:43:07 +0000 UTC]

no, semplice lavoro di contrast e filter. Poi ho impachettato tutto giocando con le layer

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Orange-Peel [2004-05-19 09:16:52 +0000 UTC]

Well cool! Yeah! ILOVU!

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s-yl In reply to Orange-Peel [2004-05-19 09:24:59 +0000 UTC]

thankies

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Orange-Peel In reply to s-yl [2004-05-20 09:17:41 +0000 UTC]

No problem!
You're a god! ^_~

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jennee [2004-05-19 08:23:40 +0000 UTC]

First thing that struck me was the black feather, dunno why. Black and purity, which usually means white... well, that's how I see it.

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s-yl In reply to jennee [2004-05-19 08:28:22 +0000 UTC]

I kind of liked that twist, plus i doubt this picture would stand out with a white feather on a white background

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yarska [2004-05-19 07:17:32 +0000 UTC]

once again sad and down. "the clock keeps ticking
into nothing, silence." this beginning is to die for

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s-yl In reply to yarska [2004-05-19 07:20:53 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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ifen [2004-05-19 06:24:56 +0000 UTC]

woo. neat and nice.

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s-yl In reply to ifen [2004-05-19 06:25:31 +0000 UTC]

Thank you

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crystalcage [2004-05-19 04:54:32 +0000 UTC]

dude this is beautiful

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s-yl In reply to crystalcage [2004-05-19 06:23:16 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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shadowvampire [2004-05-19 04:18:43 +0000 UTC]

lovely man !!!

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s-yl In reply to shadowvampire [2004-05-19 06:23:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks man

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Dearheart [2004-05-19 03:06:05 +0000 UTC]

ooooooo that is sooooo awesome man!

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s-yl In reply to Dearheart [2004-05-19 06:23:50 +0000 UTC]

Thankies

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lost-n-wasted [2004-05-19 02:31:16 +0000 UTC]

let me take this time to say that you are the best writer i have come across so far....i'll be waiting to see other writings you come up with....later bud

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s-yl In reply to lost-n-wasted [2004-05-19 06:24:12 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, glad you enjoy them

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Picabo [2004-05-18 23:32:37 +0000 UTC]

amazing job on this work you've created...great photo manip. and of course, your words are wonderful

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s-yl In reply to Picabo [2004-05-19 06:24:35 +0000 UTC]

Thank you so much my friend

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maky [2004-05-18 23:21:20 +0000 UTC]



ti amo tesoro

Il pezzo che preferisco, perchè mi ha dato una sensazione molto piacevole, forse musicalmente, è
"The grass is greener
on the other side
but it’s never green
as it was the other
day. "
Bellissima.

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s-yl In reply to maky [2004-05-19 06:25:16 +0000 UTC]

E pensare che era un pezzo triste
Ti amo tesoro mio, grazie del fav

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maky In reply to s-yl [2004-05-19 09:42:01 +0000 UTC]

Lo so, lo so, l'inglese lo capisco eh!!!
PerΓ² mi piace quel pezzo

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