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Bisguiit [2019-04-05 21:20:30 +0000 UTC]

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Ey there, so let's get started!
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Soooo..First let's talk about the shading, I like it, I like the color that you use, mainly purple, but, there's something you didn't concidered in here, where is the light coming from?? is coming from the left?? or the right??, if the light comes from the left, the shadows should do a "parallel" to the other side, to be fair, I had seen that you had handle the shading better in other drawings, like in the butterfly drawing (the gift you made for FnafNation) but I still will point it out
Also, those are arms? or are they part of the spine? that thing isn't clear at all.

The background looks dicent, maybe turn on a little bit the saturation would look better. I like your new style, his expression looks so alive, and he looks so fluffy! Now, there is a little thing that bothers me, that is the hair going throught the eyes, is not that much on the left eye, but in the right one, well, I would had put the hair over the eye.
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Vision: 4/5
The lineart looks clean is the same for the colors, but how I said, the background looks a little bit off, how I said, maybe turning a little bit high the saturation would look nicer

Originality: 4/5
Even do I think that wolves are overused, his design looks really unique! so, yeah, that's the only thing I can think about the originality

Technique: 3/5
How I said, you could have handle the shading much better, but still, is not that bad.

Impact: 3/5
Not that catching to the eye, but well, that's all I have to say, I don't know how explain this part, but oh well.
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Hey, so, that's all for now! I tried to focus more on the mistakes here because I already pointed out the things I liked on a comment, sooo...yeah!

Also, I'm trying to not be that "soft" on my critiques, just to focus more on helping than trying to not make the person feel bad.

Anyways Nora, I'm still proud of you!^^ You have been improving so much! so keep up the good job!

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KindaMarcid [2019-04-06 07:48:44 +0000 UTC]

Im interested in getting an icon commission ! :0 are ya open by chance ?

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RanchBerryCrunch [2019-04-06 04:37:31 +0000 UTC]

aaaaaaaaaaaa i love this so much and i will probably commission u when i get the point!

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Enivlens [2019-04-05 19:23:18 +0000 UTC]

holY crAP it seems like the lineart for this piece right here may be one of your best! Amazing job!

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DeviantSkyCat [2019-04-05 19:08:04 +0000 UTC]

WHOA
THIS IS AWESOME NORA EEE

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Bisguiit [2019-04-05 18:20:29 +0000 UTC]

AAAAAAAHHHHH
NORA, I'M SO PROUD OF YOU
HHHHHH-
IT LOOKS AWESOME
holy shit-
At first I thought someone else did it-
Oml, tbh, I think that I never said it but I LOVE your new style and shading!
I love the shading of this one!
I'm on cellphone rn so idk if you requested a critique but if you did-
Once I'm at my home I will try to critique this..
;w;

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Cookie-Chocoladka [2019-04-05 17:32:17 +0000 UTC]

Oh myyy... How you end up drawing such muzzles? They got really more detailed shape than before and actually more realistic too. Even there's so much fur... I don't know, looks really detailed and awesome. Your art is something good quality. *_* I don't know what to critic honestly, even... But maybe that shoulders are pretty small compared to head.. o.o It may be style choice though, kinda chibi, but for this style shoulders would fit to be bigger, I guess..? 
But I still have high impression of this art, keep doing dear! *^*

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