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SabbathLiterature — Eleven
Published: 2011-02-19 12:19:01 +0000 UTC; Views: 58; Favourites: 4; Downloads: 0
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Description Tonight when the clock struck three lines,
I couldn't make a wish anymore.
Every night up 'til today I believed,
I believed that love had a power of its own,
I believed that spark when two hearts touch.

I closed my eyes and crossed my fingers,
I could still see stars and eyelashes,
But tonight,
Tonight when I closed my eyes,
I couldn't wish, I couldn't hope,
Every night before,
I wished for you.
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Comments: 7

VS-Lucidia [2011-02-19 22:32:45 +0000 UTC]

This poem almost made me teary, its so profound, and I could surprisingly relate, sad poems tend to be the most moving I would say though, great job

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SabbathLiterature In reply to VS-Lucidia [2011-02-20 06:58:14 +0000 UTC]

Thanks Luci! <3 I love when I make people cry. :]

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VS-Lucidia In reply to SabbathLiterature [2011-02-20 21:01:29 +0000 UTC]

I hope tears of joy! xD

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SabbathLiterature In reply to VS-Lucidia [2011-02-20 23:56:37 +0000 UTC]

Hahahah, well yeah.

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Fluffy-The-Zombie [2011-02-19 13:31:48 +0000 UTC]

Fluffy approves ;D

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SabbathLiterature In reply to Fluffy-The-Zombie [2011-02-20 06:57:54 +0000 UTC]

THANKS FLUFFY!

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Fluffy-The-Zombie In reply to SabbathLiterature [2011-02-20 06:58:11 +0000 UTC]

Don't mention it lol

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