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Published: 2008-05-19 03:23:55 +0000 UTC; Views: 116; Favourites: 3; Downloads: 0
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Description One mistake
And it’s all over

One mistake
And you’ll fall lower

One break
And you’ll fall

One break
And you’ll lose it all

One dance
And you blew your final shot

One dance
And you lost what you sought

One chance
And you lost

Once chance
And now you’ll pay the cost
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Comments: 14

The-Literati [2008-05-25 14:36:23 +0000 UTC]

Lovely use of repetition. Great work.

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sabre-toothed-wolf In reply to The-Literati [2008-05-25 18:13:14 +0000 UTC]

ty very much

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doglover4life569 [2008-05-20 22:30:50 +0000 UTC]

Great job!!

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sabre-toothed-wolf In reply to doglover4life569 [2008-05-22 01:39:26 +0000 UTC]

ty

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doglover4life569 In reply to sabre-toothed-wolf [2008-05-22 23:55:16 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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Tori2389 [2008-05-20 03:04:12 +0000 UTC]

cool!

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sabre-toothed-wolf In reply to Tori2389 [2008-05-20 04:42:44 +0000 UTC]

ty

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Tori2389 In reply to sabre-toothed-wolf [2008-05-21 00:47:47 +0000 UTC]

np

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bellaswan89 [2008-05-19 04:00:06 +0000 UTC]

very nice!!!

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sabre-toothed-wolf In reply to bellaswan89 [2008-05-20 04:44:39 +0000 UTC]

ty

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bellaswan89 In reply to sabre-toothed-wolf [2008-05-20 22:49:47 +0000 UTC]

uw

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fallenfromgrace17 [2008-05-19 03:35:48 +0000 UTC]

awesome!

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sabre-toothed-wolf In reply to fallenfromgrace17 [2008-05-20 04:45:09 +0000 UTC]

ty

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fallenfromgrace17 In reply to sabre-toothed-wolf [2008-05-20 22:50:55 +0000 UTC]

you're welcome!

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