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sade75311 β Shandya Tire 2
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Published: 2015-05-04 14:27:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 18284; Favourites: 559; Downloads: 686
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I think her abdomen is just a little too small. Well, compared to her upper torso anyways. Or...maybe her legs are too small, I do not know. Something feels...off. I adore the concept though, but those are my own artistic opinions. So far, great work though.
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Beautiful poses and stunning rendering but the anatomy is noticeably off. The first things I notice are that the space between the chin and breasts appears to be too long and the changes that would occur from her breasts being in a rigid, metal breastplate have been ignored. Quick fixes are moving the head down and forward or lifting the breasts and creating cleavage. Hope that's helpful and not just annoying, unwarranted critique. Your work is just on the edge of totally awesome. The more awesome you get, the more immediately your audience will sense and home in on that little thing that doesn't mesh.
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