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Sado5 — Karai y Aimi
Published: 2008-06-29 22:12:48 +0000 UTC; Views: 967; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 6
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Karai and Aimi for the one-shot manga I'm doing, called Schythe, maybe I'll upload a page of the first chapter thi week, this may be featured in as a collab, p.s. everyone join please.
more info will be in my next jounal k? cul (c) Karai and Aimi by Sado5
(scott) lol
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Cool picture and nice details.
Yes i know you have alrady heard the legs are too thin lol
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lol thanx hahaha yea, I waz rushing to ink this pic and made alot of it look sloppy. but thanx
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awwwsome!!!
Karai is the same guy who you have the chibi of before this right??
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^-^ mhmm! *is going through her art and fixing up a few things to post TODAY!*
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cool really i hope to see it soon ^^ her legs look a bit thin but the rest is really fine n.n
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awesome, but her shins are really thin...like ready to snap thin 
but yah totally awesome!!
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lol thanx, rushed sorry, will remember.
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haha its np, ur still wayyyy better than me
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Ur detail is amazing tho. that beats skill anyday!, lol but thanx
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That looks awesome man, her legs look a little small though! It's awesome though.
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stop licking your boogers, lol
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I don't have boogers! You ardo!
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This is getting too much like Soul Eaterrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr. D<
Not bad. You need to get your bodies up to par with your faces, man.
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eeeehhhhhhh!!!!! really???? wuht increased the SE-ness????? what do you bodie-par-face thig??? Not Bad???? Did I get worse???? should I change up my style for the manga to compensate with the members of NG(that is if u wanna do that?) *sigh*
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Their bodies seem a bit long (namely the mid-sections), and the guy's legs are a bit... strange. The piece, over all, just doesn't look up to par with your work.
Soul Eater:
A fucking scythe, not to mention a guy with spikey white hair and that kind of jacket; and the chick looks a bit like Maka.
I didn't say there was anything wrong with your style, it's just you didn't do as good a job on this. Study some anatomy and stuff. Just google some models and stuff.
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okay. I understand the anatomy thing, and the Maka consept, I'll change her hair,cus in color she luks a bit different, but I rele did like the kind of modern-ish look for Karai, the white is to represent his empty, lifeless soul, like aghost, and Aimi is supposed to be a reincarnated soul reaper, but okay.... oh and thnx for the advice but i don't like using tutorials and stuff i'd rather learn on my own, but i already kno that much,i was just trying something different....
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I didn't say to use tutorials, I said learn how to draw the human body. lol
I don't mind the white hair on Karai, it's that jacket. It looks a LOT like Soul's, even in the colour version.
Again, nothing wrong with the style, it's just the execution.
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It's fine! You don't need to change anything really, esspecially not your style, just change Aimi's hair, looks too much like Maka. Karai is fine, your ok as long as he dosen't turn into a sythe.
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No offense, but at this point, ~Sado5 needs to be getting ACTUAL critique. D;
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..........well......you weren't telling him how to get BETTER! You were saying how it was too much SE-ness. SE-ness....come on! No offense
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And you're saying "OH THIS IS SO AWESOME" when tehre aer clearly more problems. I pointed out the rest after he replied again.
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I did not say that......I said it's awesome, and stated the mistakes afterward.
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oh, and no! he does not turn into a scythe lol.
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