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Published: 2018-09-18 05:39:39 +0000 UTC; Views: 1411; Favourites: 15; Downloads: 5
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Description It's been a minute since I've been here. But it's for a good reasons,

The first thing is that I've been working extra hours and days at my job in order to save up my bank account to get everything I need for the new apartment I might move in this winter. 

Another reason is that I'm, once again (kmn), revisiting the storyline of Sadistic Passion, but this time with some extra support.

About a week or so ago, SilverDreamyRose asked her friend: a writer named Katsumi Koyoyami to help me out with story and character development, since apparently each of the characters, while all of them fucked up, they don't "show their flaws" and are "too perfect". I was surprised to hear this, and despite being nervous due to my anxiety and aspergers, I've gotten along well with the writer. She was impressed with the plot of Sadistic Passion and was pleased to hear what I had planned for the series to be different from most other shows as well as filling in some plot holes she had (including for the WIP episode 4 I'm revisiting). She had described the lack of flaws of the characters and said that they seem like "Where are the flaws of the characters?.... Like they seem like they could do no wrong? Takara is bullied you say, yet she doesn't act like a victim of bullying.... Arata is a supposed yandere, yet so far, he hasn't even done what a yandere does yet. All the characters are like flawless, which is bad on its own." and it was funny hearing her read about the *spoiler alert* fight scene I have planned for episode 4 with Arata vs Akushitsuna, which I'm plannning on revisiting inspired from a scene from Heathers (2018) and from G.I Joe: Retaliation. It was awkward trying to explain the entire plot of SP to Katsumi, since I thought silver would enlighten her about the show which ended up HIGHTENING my anxiety. But I forgave her for that.

So as of the revamp of episode 3, despite me saying that I want Takara to grow stronger, I want it to happen slowly and express her awkwardness and describe how she's a victim of bullying a little better.  I decided to slightly revisit Takara's persona alittle bit and I realized the "geek-to-baddass thing" is happening a liiiiiiiiiiiiittle too soon. So I decided to take some inspiration form one of my favorite Total Drama characters and have Takara... mmm... maintain her kwirkiness. Like for example, after smacking and walking away from usono, she internally panics and says to herself "That did NOT go how I thought it would. ohhh I hope I don't go to jail" because she's used to being a loner and being awkward from most kids and although she has her badass moments, she still has cute geeky moments as well. I got the idea from Zoey (a character in Total Drama Revenge of the Island)

This hasn't been mentioned in the show yet, but the reasons why Takara is supposed to be different in her high school is because Naraku High School is basically an academy for rich kids. Which is how the majority of them have parents who own successful companies and businesses (namely Amai, who's family runs a popular fashion brand in Japan, and Oya Dama: Who's father runs a successful banking system, Hitoaji: who's parents run a jewlery factory, Shian, who's family owns an independent music label, Kizami, who's family is simply rich from their long history of producing famous, classic films, and Arata, although he'd be considered middle class, has a negligent mother who is a successfully creative interior designer). Takara on the other hand, is different as she managed to attend Naraku High school, which is supposed to be the best performing school in Japan, due to aceing a scholarship test to attend. Her family is pretty middle class and both of her parents work hard 9-to-5 jobs on a day to day basis in order to support her house and her older brother is interning at the Nonosaka News Station. Takara is also often bullied as she isn't some overprivledged, naive rich girl. While most kids attending the school brag about nice expensive clothes, cars, jewlery, etc. Takara is just thin, pretty, intelligent, nerdy and "poor" compared to most others. Takara is also supposed to be pretty shy and vulnerable, but can be very hard working when it comes to achiving a good grade or at least trying to solve a case (but it faled, leaving her to be humiliated by Maddo Tichi and all of the other students. What happened will be revealed in a flashback episode.) From what Katsumi read of episode 3, Takara is not acting the way a bullied person would. She is straight forward, a bullied person would mainly try to keep to themselves and avoid their bullies. They'd be afraid that they'll talk to the wrong person, say the wrong thing and it'll get around the school and her bullying would get worse. So that's my fault on my side, and I hope to fix that when I re-vamp episode 3, I still want her to have badass moments but still maintain her quirks and cuteness like a shy person would. Like for example: she gets mad and kicks an enemy in the crotch but snaps back to her well mannered personality and apologizes in fear before running off.

The same would go for the rest of the characters in the main cast AND the supporting cast, as though the majority of the series' cast are rich, privledged children, they are all still fucked up to the point where you debate on whether you root for them or not. Shian has trouble confronting Kizami of his abusive behavior, Oya is struggling with his true identity, Usono has anger issues, Takara is being bullied for being different from most rich kids and struggles with being a good detective, Arata has abandonment issues and has been isolated his whole life, Amai is oblivious to her bitchiness, and Gosu has trouble bonding with her adoptive sister. Everyone in this show is pretty fucked up but I have no clue if these are considered "flaws". I do have an episode (now a 2 part episode) that was planned called "Skeletons" where the main and supporting cast tell the main girls their confessions, which is where Katsumi offered the idea of adding a few more episodes to the 10 episode season to make room for character and plot development.

This most likely means production might take longer but I want to make the series perfect and unique for you guys, for you to bond and emotionally compete with the characters. The series has a few messages: The first is that while there's very few people who are naturally born pure evil, the majority of flawed individuals still have good within them and the second would be "You don't have to risk a lot for something you already have" (Oooh, foreshadowing!)

I wanna thank Silver for asking Katsumi to help me, I can't wait to show her more of my scripts and talk abotu more ideas of what I have planned for the season and for the individual characters for you guys to love them and to make them iconic and memorable! 

I want y'all to check out Katsumi's Quotev account, She's got some bomb-ass, beautifully written stories over there that I think you might be interested in reading during a quiet day!
www.quotev.com/1997LovesA1974

PS. for the model above, I wanted to make something more descreet for Arata, despite a scared Takara already knowing who's behind the mask, so sad.

Credits:
Credits:
Head by Kurusou
Base by Nintendraw (DON'T THANK ME AGAIN WHEN I USE YOUR BASE EVERY DAY! YOU'RE WELCOME!)
Hair by AppleWaterSugar
Black Rabbit/Ariana Grande Mask by Raisuke-Tamakasai  
Half-Face Mask by Jalmod
Boots by Riveda1972  
Metal Choker by o-DSV-o  

"Sadistic Passion" is owned by Lunar Sky Network 2018.
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Comments: 5

DominoPunkyHeart [2018-10-15 03:37:30 +0000 UTC]

This is very sexy   I like this character concept.

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SailorSkylerChan [2018-09-22 13:43:21 +0000 UTC]

is he grabbing a certain area

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SageWainwright In reply to SailorSkylerChan [2018-09-22 18:17:42 +0000 UTC]

yessssssssss.

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Raisuke-Tamakasai [2018-09-18 22:05:44 +0000 UTC]

if you need any other clothes tell me note me  b i s h !

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Jacbocford [2018-09-18 06:17:46 +0000 UTC]

his chest is a bit...... eh-

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