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SagittaMagica In reply to Terkdude [2007-05-06 09:30:04 +0000 UTC]

Thanks! Dude!

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Terkdude In reply to SagittaMagica [2007-05-07 21:08:20 +0000 UTC]

anytime

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SagittaMagica In reply to AdmiralTigerclaw [2007-05-06 09:35:59 +0000 UTC]

Ok, what are your suggestions...
Im all ears ^^,

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AdmiralTigerclaw In reply to SagittaMagica [2007-05-06 17:19:56 +0000 UTC]

Okay, I would say, shrink her down, put her in the lower right corner. (Ensure the boundries still cut off what isn't already in the picture.)

Remove the current background.

Then put a layer under the small chachamaru, place larger chachamaru there and set opacity in the forty to fifty range for that layer.

For the background, it seems like she's almost looking off to the left, so I'd put something like either a sunset or a moonrise that she would be looking at. (Stylization rather than the monster.)

Also, a few shading inconsistencies on the Dress.
You've got the light source somewhere in front of her, yet only the inside of the ribbon on the back is darkened. The sides away from the lightsource should be shaded.
The stalkings just aren't lightsource shaded at all.
The apron as well.

That's my take.

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SagittaMagica In reply to AdmiralTigerclaw [2007-05-09 04:26:08 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I know that my biggest mistake would be the shadowing(big pain in the arse >.<

Thanks anyways <_<...

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AdmiralTigerclaw In reply to SagittaMagica [2007-05-09 14:42:26 +0000 UTC]

Not to sound like an arse myself... but if you know something's a problem, you should probably take the time to fix it and ensure the quality of your work.

In the case of the shading errors, the lightsourcing's actually pretty easy, as most of the backside is dark anyway. The objects are going to be lit only on the left side, if there's nothing that would cast a shadow on them. So in reality, as an example, most of the ribbon would be the dark shade, except on the edges that would be sticking out the sides.

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