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Published: 2008-10-28 00:43:35 +0000 UTC; Views: 3209; Favourites: 1; Downloads: 17
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Who could this mysterious girl be, and why in the world did she come out of the T.V.

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sneaksiegarrett [2008-11-02 03:40:48 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, interesting.. Pretty cool, but I hope you don't mind me saying but... I noticed a bit of error. "what's going, on" - the comma should be after on shouldn't it? Also, just a friendly tip. I think the sit up and step step are not necessary. Of course that's just my opinion, do what you want of course.

Anyways, makes me think of midori days where the main character is faced with a strange situation.

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Saiyanjedi In reply to sneaksiegarrett [2008-11-05 06:17:31 +0000 UTC]

Hmm, I guess I didn't check well enough, ehh well it happens. The whole idea behind those minor sounds is just to let people know like the action, sort of like how some comics put in sounds for something that may not be necessary or make much sense. In a way, I guess you could say it's like Midori days, following a story like that, normal guy and mysterious girl; except this story isn't going have the girl end up as his right hand, LOL.

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sneaksiegarrett In reply to Saiyanjedi [2008-11-11 04:24:33 +0000 UTC]

Well right, I know.. I just meant basically what you just said... the normal guy that is faced with a strange situation.

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LordBorok [2008-10-28 15:45:20 +0000 UTC]

cant wait to next episode

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XenoAisam [2008-10-28 11:01:29 +0000 UTC]

andd~
how u make her eyes close?
photoshop?


hehehe
i see some

defenseless
"i still cant put my finger on it"

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Saiyanjedi In reply to XenoAisam [2008-11-05 06:20:35 +0000 UTC]

Sorry for the slow reply, Yeah I did have to do the eyes in photoshop, I was surprised that Naruli wasn't eye poseable. And what did you mean exactly by """--defenseless
"i still cant put my finger on it" --""" ???

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XenoAisam In reply to Saiyanjedi [2008-11-05 07:06:27 +0000 UTC]

ohh~ nothing~~

just some pervert think of mine~

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Jessie-Belli [2008-10-28 01:21:37 +0000 UTC]

is this really your story? 8O or just a comic you are working on?

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Saiyanjedi In reply to Jessie-Belli [2008-10-28 01:27:38 +0000 UTC]

It's both, I making the story for the comic, it's just something silly I thought up. Though it seems very cookie cutter to so many other stories, which makes for a simple story since you can just follow a general outline

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Jessie-Belli In reply to Saiyanjedi [2008-10-28 01:28:39 +0000 UTC]

oooh i see, i like it very much though =]

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leenos [2008-10-28 00:46:54 +0000 UTC]

REally liking this comic so far,a cool idea too use garry's mod for it!

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Saiyanjedi In reply to leenos [2008-10-28 00:56:31 +0000 UTC]

Thanks, yeah it's lots of fun to use Garry's Mod for comics, it's easy and enjoyable.

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leenos In reply to Saiyanjedi [2008-10-28 19:24:19 +0000 UTC]

The best kinda work is the work you enjoy!
You ever watch any machinima?

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Saiyanjedi In reply to leenos [2008-10-28 21:06:03 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, once in a while, most notably red vs. blue, but I watch other Machinima too.

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