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#17 #comic #meya #wolf #2014 #onward #page #wolves
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Please don't ask for points like this. It's highly disrespectful.
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Not exactly the best landing Meya, but its the fact that you fought back that counts
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Nah, definitely not! xD But yeah, it is! ^v^ You shouldn't let anyone do as they please with you. ;>
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Thank you so much! 
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Wow Sally! You're really pumping out these pages--awesome job! Really love the motion you've been incorporating here, definitely makes the action easy to read. One thing I'd point out though is the importance of concept of "showing rather than telling"
From what I can gather from the dialogue on the second panel, Meya took out this mysterious enemy's right eye. (or something else, just my guess) But I think it would be a lot more intriguing if you suggested this visually--it lets the reader read between the lines a bit more, challenges them to pay attention to the artwork. You could make more use of that great motion you've been showcasing these last few pages ; ) Dialogue isn't really necessary here, as you can say a lot of what's on the character's mind just through expression.
Hope that makes sense! As always, awesome work~
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Haha! Sure do! ;D I'm excited to soon be finished with re-making pages! 
Thank you so much! I'm very happy to hear that!
Well, I cannot tell you what, but she did something. That is correct.
And thanks for the advice! ^^ I like to tell stories with pictures more than with words, but I found it hard here, due to the lack of space. And I was afraid people wouldn't get it. :'c But! I'll try my best regardless of that! ^^
And thanks again! ;v;
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Hahaha! x3
Noooooooo!!!! 
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This is great, I love those panels, the backgrounds too!!
What I seen on the first panel.. Moon Moon. Omfg. crazyhyena.com/imagebank/g/moo…
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Haha! Thank you so much! I'm very happy to hear that! ;D
HAHAHAHA!!! Omgg! Someone finally noticed it! x'D Thanks for that! ;D
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Damn, first person huh? I FEEL SPECIAL
it gave me a giggle :')
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Good job Meya! Ya nailed dat pose!
Snyggt det blev när du typ.. "suddade" ut blodet sådär! xD
Höööö-öger.... Men i alla fall, riktigt himla snyggt! Ja' vill ha mee-er!
Du e duktig å... Hej.
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Tackar sååå mycke brah!
Kul att höra att du digga't! >3°
...AFFONS!!! *3*
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Vah så lite brah!
Öddvödd!!! (-°3°-)
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I dint read your old comic, but anyway Im so curious! When is the next coming?
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The next page is coming pretty soon!
The lineart and flat coloring of page 18 is currently finished! ^w^ So, it's not that far away! ;3
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Yeah meta you totally took out it's right eye! But don't worry strange wolf, my fursona doesn't have a right eye either! XD
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Let's hope she did! ;D
Haha! Yeah, it's always better to feel that you're not alone! ;3
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Some pro moves there, Ms. Protagonist! xD
Still, it looks like he fled!
.... With the rabbit, but still.
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Haha! Indeed! x'D
Yeah, let's hope it did! >3< She's rather vulnerable at the moment! o3o
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Yepp! >~< You can't just attack a mysterious wolf like that and expect nothing as consequence. xc
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Haha! Sorry, can't tell you! ;3 You'll have to wait and see! >v<
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