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Published: 2016-01-15 08:42:38 +0000 UTC; Views: 27158; Favourites: 299; Downloads: 0
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First Page: sally-ce.deviantart.com/art/TW…
Previous chapter: Chapter 3 - Fur and feathers
Next chapter: Chapter 5 - Green eyes
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Story, comic, characters and artwork © Sally-Ce
Translation help by kaschill7
Personal note:
A week ago I received the drawing tablet I won in Skailla 's contest... I'm still overjoyed about it!! <33333 I haven't had a chance to try it out just yet, because I need to purchase a wire for it to work. BUT! That's no problem! 
(NO. I am not saying it to brag. I am just happy and wanted to share a happy happening with all of you.)
ANNNNDDD about the page.
That is one way I don't want to wake up on. x_x
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Comments: 65
the last part of the page is me waking up for school.
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Did anyone notice lankie found the banana peel Tacaro found earlier?
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So I'm working on this bit of your Onward MAP. I was wondering if it was okay I included the bit with Umbra smiling at Zarhe before she howls? I'm trying to fit the part requirements.
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(I'm really, really sorry about this late reply, but yes, that'd be nice! ^^ But if you decided not to, it's okay!)
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How much longer are you going to do pages once a week? ;w;
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How long I'll keep doing 1 every second week?? Until school isn't stressing me too much. ;u; Hopefully in March or late February!!
But I'll be sure to keep the comic up and update you all once something happens!!
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This comic is awsome! I always can't wait for more and you are amazing at drawing!
Keep up the exellent work!
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Maw… thank you so very much!! It makes me very happy to hear! <33333
Aww… thank you so much once again!!
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Haha, I'm so glad that you do!! ^^
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GAH I caught up so fast... I wanna see more~!
I love reading comics, especially ones that pull you in and boy does this pull you in! (I didn't even start on page 1, and I still got dragged in...Good sign!)
I loveeee the expressions. Most amazing part of it. I also extremely like your lineart and style. They just go together so nicely ^_^ I really like this Umbra wolf, but I also like Meya and Tacorooooo c:
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Lankie: "I'M UP! I'M UP! I'M UP!"
Rubigo: "TURN THE BLOODY HOWL OFF!"
I love how all of Lankie's fur is pointing up
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Haha! x'D
I'm glad that you do!!
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The faces in the last few pages! Gosh, you're getting better and better every time XD
And I'm really starting to like Umbra, a lot 
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I hope you don't mind, but I have a few friendly critiques on this project. Feel free to ignore them!
I like this story, but sometimes it feels like the transitions between panels is jumpy... Like I don't know who I am looking at unless I pay attention to the individual markings of each character, and it distracts me from the story. For example, I thought that Rubigo and the wolf with the crazy accent where the same character and had to re-read several pages to figure it out. A transition page between groups of characters would help a lot with this. You could also try introducing characters into a scene with a "wide shot" showing which characters were leaving and which were showing up. Also it might just be me but the mood of every character plus the art style itself seems really inconsistent. For a while I thought this was a collaboration project and that every few pages a new artist started working on it.
I only mention this stuff because I really enjoy this story and your work is gorgeous, and sometimes constructive criticism can help improvement. All this aside, I am really really enjoying this and am very excited to see where this tale is going. I hope to see more of this in the future, and btw, you do EXCELLENT facial expressions, it adds so much and is really entertaining.
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I really like the light in these pages and how the trees blend into the background. It gives the panels a lot of depth<3
Also great work on the expressions once again, especially Lankie in the last one, haha.
I think I'd look excactly like Rubigo if I was woken up like this, tho xD
And I'm so thrilled to see what you do with that new tablet *-*
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Something does not seem good if her howl is scaring the crap out of the rest of the pack.
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I'm glad that you're observant!
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Ah...you know what I mean XD
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Everyone up! XD that would be a rude awakening. looks good.
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Haha! Yuss! ;D Absolutely, it's like having a sibling walking into your room and start singing the lion king opening, the loudest they could. Or just screaming for that matter. :')
Thank you!
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Yes XD my sister kinda did that to my mom, the screaming one, she thought a mouse jumped on her and yelled and that woke mom up they're sharing a room.
No problem!
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I'm glad that you enjoy it! :'D
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It's an interesting comic that fits my interests, and you're welcome dear!! ^_^
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Haha poor Rubigo ! He looks so confused, and pissed off. I think Zarhe will need to deal with an angry brother XD Lankie is quite adorable too, he kept his banana peal in the mouth for the whole night ? Aaw that's cute. What a baby fluff ball
Can't wait to see what's coming next
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Hahaha, yeah, he isn't very fond of that kind of awakening... :'D
Haha, yeah he wanted to keep some for later...!! ;>
Oh thank you so very much!! ^^ <333333 Seriously, thank you for all of your sweet words!!
Soon, very soon!! ;D <33333 (Oh gosh, we'll see how that goes! :'>)
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I wouldn't be either x)
Aw nice and adorable idea he has ! ^__^ Tacoro would pretty much agree with it I believe ;D
You're the most welcome dear 
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Hey, Sally, I want to start my own comic, called HUNT, but i'm not sure my art is good enough. If I send you a link, will you look and tell me?
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Oh! That's wonderful!!
Of course! I could give it a look!
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Thank you so much!!!
This is the cover
hollymask.deviantart.com/art/H…
And this is one of the panels:
hollymask.deviantart.com/art/S…
Sorry, I couldn't decide which one to link, so I did both.... XD
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Oh! It looks promising!!
The cover is rather intriguing! 83 The mist-effect looks really awesome!!
And your wolf (from a panel) looks really cool!
I think you could do a great comic!! <3333333 Honestly, You should give it a go!
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thanks! I was worried because my stupid art program sucks. I have to find one of those collage makers to make my pages, and it always turns out too small. Thank-you, though! your thoughts are appreciated!
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