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Published: 2002-07-18 09:13:23 +0000 UTC; Views: 251; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 39
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Description i've been meaning to submit this for a while now, but i always end up thinking it's not worth coz it's in portuguese and no one will understand it... but what the hell

i wrote this a couple months ago, i had finished reading a book by a spanish futurism-influenced writer called Cuca Canals, and i became quite inspired with the artwork on that book. i liked futurism before, like with the works of Álvaro de Campos, and i've always liked surrealism too, although this is not quite that

then something inspiring happened one day in my life, and i joined the 2 sources of inspiration and created this during a class (the place where i write more is in class, listening to the teacher's voice far far away... i've got very few poems that weren't writtend during classes )

so here it is... as soon as you download it (you gotta download it to see it), you'll understand why i didn't post it as .txt - it has an unusual formatting

(for lack of a better-suitting category, like "e-poetry" or something like that, i'm posting this in "art poetry" because i don't think it fitted in any of the poetry section ones

comments are always welcome
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Comments: 4

alienista [2002-08-25 23:46:42 +0000 UTC]

Bem, como o poema é em portugues, penso que nao tem mal em comentar em portugues:

Gostei.
Gostei especialmente da repetição e diminuição de certas palavras-chave no final de certos versos.
Um estranha maneira de escrever poesia, mas muito intressante.

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xeoncat [2002-07-18 22:51:59 +0000 UTC]

mto cool, mto cool mesmo, o estilo tá mto interessante.

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edgemog [2002-07-18 09:53:55 +0000 UTC]

Está .. bonito, é bom ver poesia 'portuguesa' por cá.

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prcr [2002-07-18 09:38:20 +0000 UTC]

that's pretty nice! i also like adding some 'visual content' to my poetry... check out my poetry site if you'd like: vazi0

the only thing i didn't like very much was the word lh ... -hehe- it just didn't seem to fit in very well, perhaps you should write it two normal 'o's...

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