Fousdell [2020-04-17 15:53:19 +0000 UTC]
Hi, I'm from projectcomment
First, what I like. The perspective/angle, I see very few illustrations done in this view (for better & worse). My eye travels from top to bottom at an angle. Without the digital art descriptor I'd probably be fooled into thinking it a traditional watercolor piece, or traditional to start and finished up digitally. Good clean line-work overall, and bright without any glare, colors aren't muddy. There are no "dead areas" (top, bottom, sides) that I could nit-pick on.
If there's any one thing I would change, is the shadow coming from the speakers. Make them darker so that her character "pops" out more to the viewer (I'm nuts when it comes to contrast), and also show more of a connection between the upper parts of the piece and the lower; maybe a darker tone in the shadows of the hair too, for a similar effect, although that might risk making it look "gritty", which is something I don't think you want based on what I'm seeing here.
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