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Published: 2003-08-16 05:46:16 +0000 UTC; Views: 100; Favourites: 0; Downloads: 29
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Description A stain on my inside
Some smudge of obscenity
Liquify this contagous plague
And allow me to drink to my death.
You're trembling; how sad.
Was it something i've done?
Have you lost your sanity
In this bottle of purification?
They were not the kindest of foes
We were not admitted into their hellish world.
Damned be that quaint voice
Encouraging me to continue drinking.
Swallow their blood, sweat, saliva.
Prod their lifeless flesh with the slivers of bones
And roast them in the icy dungeon of hatred.
Cursed, for you are descendants of the sun.
Darkness requires no heat, no love.
You cannot see my outstretched arms,
Endlessly searching for a throat to grasp.
You cannot feel my breath, for I do not breathe.
My head throbs through anticipation,
One day I shall drink you whole,
As my body, an endless flask
Containing the essence of the former.
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Comments: 5

imaverick85 [2003-08-16 15:44:11 +0000 UTC]

Well it took me a while to get this, (i had to read it twice) Don't worry I normally don't get poems, sometimes i have to read them 10 times before i even understand any part of them. So this is progress for me. : )

Nevertheless this is great.

-Maverick

BTW: how do you make all those little happy faces and stuff?

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sanchuudoku In reply to imaverick85 [2003-08-16 22:57:07 +0000 UTC]

Yeah, I guess that my poetry's a little difficult to understand sometimes. I'm glad that you like it, though. As for the faces there should be a guide as to making little DA faces somewhere on the website. As for the one that I just used, just type : aww : without the spaces. (: D) Hopefully it'll work for you!

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imaverick85 In reply to sanchuudoku [2003-08-17 03:16:20 +0000 UTC]

thanks for the help. i'll be adding your icon to my sig as soon as i learn how. (lowers head)

-maverick

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asukachan [2003-08-16 05:50:56 +0000 UTC]

^^ well I like it , keep up the work

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sanchuudoku In reply to asukachan [2003-08-16 05:51:56 +0000 UTC]

Aw, thanks!

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